What a wonderful story! I definitely stayed up way too late finishing it, but it was well worth it. I love how you incorporated Marcus toward the end. I always enjoy fics that bring him "back to life" in one way or another.

I was going back through my old favorites, and when l saw that this had not only more chapters but was completed, l got real excited! I started reading this back when it had ten chapters. I was excited about getting the 11 chapter and then nothing else. I will login and do proper review of the new chapters (to me). So excited to reread this wonderful story and finally see how it ends!

This story is really good. I love the relationships between Bella, Marcus and Jane.

This story was wonderful! I just found it yesterday and I have not stopped. I am so thankful for all the people who kept you motivated to fontinue with it. On that note, sequel? Yes, definitely. I was kind of disapointed to not hear about Marcus and his love reconnecting after soooo many years. He truly deserves his happiness.

Kayozm,

I stopped reading when my Mom became ill with intestinal cancer and passed April 4, 2019. Although I miss her everyday and I'm still grieving her loss, I've finally grieved enough to be able to finish your amazing and wonderful story!

So, thank you for writing it and I'll always be grateful for the kindness you extended to me.

Happy Writing, Stay Safe And Well!

Hugs!

Thank you, thank you, thank you for giving Marcus that hope at the end. This was a beautiful story anyway and that was the perfect ending if not actually seeing him with her.

How interesting ! I'm very late joigning this party but this story looks intriguing. I'll comment as I go...

Great work, and a super fun concept. With such an intense & detailed lead up, it felt like the story's climax and resolution were a bit rushed comparatively? Like we'd just gotten into this whole time spanning idea and they've realistically gotten together and started cancer treatment... and then bam - vampire, stolen, Volterra, fight scene - END! Totally glad that you completed the story, don't get me wrong, but I think there's an opportunity to flesh out the 'second half' of things, like from Victoria onwards. I did see you've mentioned a possibility for a short sequel one shot maybe - love to read that one day too :)

I am greatly enjoying this story. I am thankful that it is complete.

Hi, oh my hosh! Thank you so much for wtitting this story. I couldnt stop reading! I also love that you say what you have bren reading and giving us a little taste of these stories. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Thank you again!

thank you for your story! it was wonderful and so different to any i have read before. i absolutely loved every moment of it

Thank you so much for this story. It had a great ending. It felt like it wrapped up quickly after Bella and Jasper were reunited. I’d love a few more chapters about them, Bella’s reunion with Charlie, etc. and definitely would love more from Marcus. Loved it thank you!

Gah, are they seriously only going realize the other is alive when they see each other? Probably smack dab in the middle of the attack, the way this is going?
Maria seems to be in for a surprise, though...

Great. No phone.

God, is it so hard to lift a phone and call the Cullens? Have they forgotten that a vampire has to be burned in order to die? What, did they assume a newborn would have the wits to throw his pieces into the house to burn? Are they even thinking? Wow, leaders of the vampire world, one wonders how the vampire race is not extinct by now.
Okay, rant finished. I feel much better now.