Reviews for Lodestar |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wowww |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol Kaiser. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now this just makes me sad because my sog was stolen recently |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the great story. It was a great read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Threatening an EXTREMELY Powerful Magno-kinetic... while wearing full body covering metal armor, and holding their only surviving family hostage in rough shape... Well I feel Darwin would of put a metal dunce cap on their heads engraved with Darwin Award Winning: Dunce, but them being meat jelly kind of makes impossible. Unless you want to scoop it up into the hat like an Ice Cream Cone of Horrors... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude. You said 10-49 was barking dog, ava then that is a traffic light out. Make up your mind |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've lost interest in this story, mostly because there is almost nothing happening. This 8 chapters, in my opinion, could've been reduced to 1 or 2 chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story thank you for sharing this epic work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is lit |
![]() ![]() This is where the story ends for me. There's just not enough action to justify this boring, tedious relationship bullshit. A meh story overall, by the way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() a wooden gun get taken away by police in a metal car with metal handcuffs |
![]() ![]() ![]() " electromagnetic spectrumholy shit that op af since things such as gamma rays, x rays and mixrowaves are apart of that |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah kill that bitch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A mist excellent story! Thank you for sharing it with us! |