Reviews for Lodestar |
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![]() ![]() ![]() And now for the dumb part of every Worm story. Why does every goddamned story have to follow the stations of canon, including these idiots? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nobody gets a kill order for that. Seriously, this is a town with Hookwolf, Lung, Oni Lee, Kaiser, and more, and not one of them had kill orders. |
![]() ![]() shoulda made it more painful for all of them. they were a lost cause and very very fragile in mind lol but the threat of a pandemic is paramount |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is annoyingly forced. I can't tell if it's because Magneto forced it by lying about the police being suspicious or of it's just bad writing. Either way, it's annoying. |
![]() ![]() need her to take her father seriously. if he has the an OP warging ability then he's in danger of actually losing his consciousness to the wild and leave an empty husk behind. that's scarier than bran stark ability, at least he only needed summer lol as well as being a greenseer |
![]() ![]() i hope they become best friends and also over hurting nazis |
![]() ![]() lul nazi's getting their due? deserved. shoudlve been exterminated a long time ago and i wish it's the same irl |
![]() ![]() YESSS KILL ALL NAZIS |
![]() ![]() her asking him if he likes german music is so gold lmfaooo keep the humor because i think that would just about make taylor sane in talking to her granpop |
![]() ![]() oh the coronary that he would have when he learns of the neo nazis lmfao i say crush them all and be done with them |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. Nice ending. Kind of wonder what happened to some of the other people at the end, but this was a good ending point without going into too much detail. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Galactus vs Scion... yeah, that's not a fight. That's pest control. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I didn't expect this and it was awesome. Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. Yeah, HIPAA laws are pretty draconian. That Nursing Assistant is going to have a lot of Instagram hits but no job at the very least. If my neighbor lived alone and had kids or dogs and was admitted to my hospital, legally I couldn't do anything or alert anyone because the enforcers can be pretty anal about that sort of thing. At worst we're talking prison time. Something I haven't seen in fics dealing with Panacea, that I'm now wondering about. Nurses spend a good chunk (it may not be most but it's close) of their time documenting nowadays, sitting in front of computers dealing with the "paperwork" end of things. I have to wonder how much Panacea has to fill out between patients - that would be a major contrib to her depression/stress after all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() In the comics they generally don't pay attention to a lot of the little details in getting into and surviving in space. Then again, a lot of SF has the explosive decompression from a little hole in your ship - which is inaccurate and based on deepsea creatures exposed to sealevel pressures. The radiation is more a problem, as is heat. Without an atmosphere, sunward facings heat up a lot and the side away freezes due to the lack of insulating/heat distribution from the air. Little details like that escape the comic book writers for some reason. Hopefully Taylor has at least that much science in her background. |