Oh this is going to be glorious, i’m always on the lookout for a good Magneto!Powers fic and you have set the scene beautifully on this one.

One of the four fundamental forces of the universe under Taylors command and the man, the myth, the legend Magneto(within his OG helmet via some horcrux-ish business) guiding helping her explore the intricate abilities of Electromagnetic Force.

Magneto is referring to San Marco, which he briefly conquered back in X-Men #4.

Good by comicbook fanfiction standards. Suffers from standard power inflation nonsense and eleventh hour deus ex buttocks solutions. Quite good for what it's trying to be. 8/10

I approve that you dealt with dumb cosmic bullshit with dumber cosmicer bullshit, author. It's extremely comicbooky.

Kind of a copout to have Magsy solve half the problem offscreen, author.

I keep feeling bad for lung
all that slowly building respect and plans, then pow lung is erased from the story.

Tanks! It was a wonderful fanfic!

Fun fact, the monoply dude has never had a monocle.

While this is an interesting story I've gotten very tired of reading about all powerful Taylors who can single handedly solve all the problems in the world

Excellent work! Things wrapped up pretty quick but that's better than leaving it unfinished. It was an awesome ride!

situationally an idiot! hahaha!

This was really amazing

Eeeeeh, I'm not happy with the direction this has been going, so far. I get that everyone's got their own problems and Worm is a world fueled by paranoia and self-centeredness, but I'm missing someone, anyone really, actually standing up for Taylor instead of just waving their hands around going all 'oh no she's so powerful and so tactless, whatever shall we do?' She's to blame for the gang war, Amy? For real?

Interesting and (well enough written in my opinion) a very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait to read more from you. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow such stories as long as you will write them. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.

Thank you so much for sharing.

An intriguing start to what promises to be a interesting story. I have read quite a number of "FanFiction" stories, and many have been enjoyable. It looks like it will likely take a few chapters to get all your main characters and store line fleshed out, but with the hints provided I like where I see this going.

Thanks for sharing!