Reviews for The Warrior Sword
BillaB chapter 9 . 4/23
Could you do an epilogue? I want to see Lonnie and Jay reconcile with their fathers, and I want to see Jay meet Shang. I wonder what Jafar will do now in Auradon?
veroandlegolas chapter 9 . 4/22
Beautiful last chapter !
I really liked how things were solved !
I love that Jafar wants to learn to get along with his son and see the great man who became!
Lonnie and Jay together without dramas, that was the most cute !
Amazing story! I enjoy it very much !
You are amazing, thanks for these great stories!
A big hug!
Vero ;)
ChordOverstreetFan chapter 8 . 4/22
I'm not surprised that Ben was the one to calm down Mal. Not one bit.
Loved everything about this, though.
Guest chapter 8 . 4/22
So many awesome things happened in this chapter. Please update!
veroandlegolas chapter 8 . 4/22
Woww Excellent chapter !
I hope they have been able to defeat Nasira !
I really like Uma in this story !
The moment between Jafar and Jay was beautiful, I wish they could start having a better relationship !
Jay said he loves Lonnie that was so beautiful !
I can not wait to read more of this great story !
A hug!
Vero ;)
BillaB chapter 7 . 4/19
Please update soon!
EroSlackerMicha chapter 7 . 4/15
I was reading this and my friend remark "Oh Mal's going to have Chinese tonight." then looked at her husband, "That sounds good."
I need new friends without warped humor.

keep up the god work
veroandlegolas chapter 7 . 4/14
Great chapter !
The parts of the fights are excellent ! They are beautifully described, I congratulate you!
Nasira seems to be a very evil villain !
I hope that Lonnie can get that good little side of Jafar that he showed on the island !
Uma was great in this chapter !
I hope Mal does not hurt Lonnie !
Looking forward to the next chapter!
The story is great !
A big hug!
Vero ;)
veroandlegolas chapter 6 . 4/9
Great chapter!
Nasira the twin sister of Jafar, I never could see it coming! Only I can describe it withe one word ... AMAZING !
I loved the interaction of Lonnie and Jay to try to cheat Nasira ! The way they called each other...Babe and sweetie... I loved it, it was very funny but cute in the same time!
The last sentence of Mulan was incredible, the best of all the chapter, I could not stop laughing!
I can not wait to read as follows !
The story is excellent !
A big hug!
Vero ;)
PhoenixMist77 chapter 5 . 4/3
Just finished reading A Moment of Choice yesterday (sorry didn’t review wanted to get on with the sequel lol) and now all caught up with this story. Both so good! I can’t wait to read more.
Miss Sapphire Pearl chapter 5 . 3/31
Wait...what just happened! You have me on the edge of my seat, I can't... This is such a good story!
veroandlegolas chapter 5 . 3/30
Noooo you can not cut the chapter like that ! I need to know as follows !.. :)
Who was the person who took the sword from Jafar?!
Mal controlled by the sword that's not good!
I love Uma in this chapter, thanks to you is a character that I start to like a lot!
I love that Jane uses her magic !
I hope from the heart that Jafar's words are true and he does not want to hurt Jay and Lonnie !
I wish that Mushu is well!
I can not wait to read more of this amazing story !
You're the best!
Big hug,
Vero ;)
veroandlegolas chapter 4 . 3/27
Woww Excellent chapter !
I loved the sweet moment between Lonnie and Jay !
Grandma wants babies and now Jay wants them too, that was so cute !
Mushu great, this dragon is the best of Disney and you write him excellent !
I love that Jane can use her magic !
Jafar and Mal, this is getting more and more interesting !
I can not wait to read as follows this amazing story!
Big hug!
Vero ;)
Dark wolf if midnight chapter 3 . 3/26
please update
veroandlegolas chapter 3 . 3/17
Excellent chapter !
Mal is in danger near Jafar !
Doug is a genius, I love him !
Mal and Uma seem to be a good team !
Mushu and Lonnie's grandmother are geniuses !
I can not wait to read the next chapter ! the story is excellent !
A big hug!
Vero :)
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