|Reviews for Narcissa's Chance|
| KinkyJAC chapter 50 . 10/14
Is this complete? Either way great story.
| BillBrink chapter 50 . 9/26
I usually don't like to even read stories that take Harry to a time where he isn't living with his friends outside of school. Then your title didn't interest me at all. After all, I am interested in HP stories, not Narcissa. But your summary seemed enticing enough to at least read the first few chapters, then I was hooked. I can't believe how exciting this story was/is. It has grabbed my attention over all others I've been following. You kept the characters believable and engaging. The plot moved at a good pace and you solved the time travel problems by having him in another dimension. The young James, et al, did seem to act older than they would as 12 year olds, however I understand why you did that in order to resolve future relationship concerns from your readers. It is a great story of relationships and redemption, not just of the Blacks, but as the final line in "Pretty Woman" goes, "She turned around and saved him right back". You obviously have something more to say, as you haven't marked this one as complete, but I bet most of your readers would be satisfied as it is (Okay, we haven't dealt with Apolline yet, but she has been on the periphery, so no hair lost). Thank you for such an enjoyable few days.
| ianramos22 chapter 17 . 9/20
as always Harry's a lucky dog!
| thepetetgreene chapter 11 . 9/18
Great read so far. only real issue that keeps popping up for me is that they keep saying thing about being an adult at 18. in Magical Britain at least the age of adulthood is 17 Years of age. other than that, great read so far.
| Guest chapter 20 . 9/18
Good story so far. Like the direction you've taken everything
| Concolor44 chapter 50 . 9/15
Excellent take-down of Moldymort. I appreciate all the details, and especially like how the actions of the various characters made sense in context. Also, fighting a major demon is never - and SHOULD never - be any kind of cake-walk. That was well done.
Kudos, my friend! Multifarious kudos.
| FromTheUnknown chapter 18 . 9/12
Harry couldn't have appeared on the black tapestry. You mentioned a few chapter ago that this is a completely different timeline.
| Concolor44 chapter 21 . 9/10
Heh! Swapping embarrassing stories. That a nice, traditional way of getting to know someone.
| Concolor44 chapter 18 . 9/10
This story just gets better and better.
What a RELIEF that Harry finally came clean with Bella and Cissy about his past!
| The foxxx chapter 26 . 9/9
In an earlier chapter Didn't you say that jame,Sirius,peter, and lupin where in 4th year, but in this chapter you said that Jane is 4 years older than lupin, that would mean that she would have graduated from Hogwarts the previous year.
| Smokeing chapter 50 . 9/8
Enjoy this story very much look forward to more
| Titanking666 chapter 50 . 9/8
Can't wait to read more. Update again real soon.
| Guest chapter 50 . 9/5
| lameduck987 chapter 12 . 9/7
Nice milf to keep, at this rate he really might as well get Andrea
| WesternReader chapter 2 . 9/6
I find it unrealistic that he describes how his uncle whipped his behind with his belt and lied about his parents to him when explaining voldemort's plans. I do not think that is vital nor do I believe people normally bring that with that level of detail arbitrarily.