Reviews for Narcissa's Chance
son of kronos chapter 1 . 10/7
There kids Harry, don't become what you dispose. I beg, don't become Tom Riddle. You are Gray, you are the balance, you are the eclipse. Don't drown yourself in darkness.
jaqmaq77 chapter 51 . 9/15
Enjoyed it from start to finish - some characters from 'Partners?' but what happened to the vampire and the one-armed DE?
Did Nymphadora hate mummy? did Harry get his powers back?
So any unanswered questions...
Devilking1994 chapter 13 . 8/4
God damn it Harry is breaking hearts left right and centre

Feel really bad for Minerva hope to see another story like this but with Harry x Minerva instead
Devilking1994 chapter 10 . 8/3
I feel super bad for Minerva she really deserves some love maybe a version of this story which is
Harry x Minerva

I'd like to see that
Devilking1994 chapter 3 . 8/2
So they like each other but won't admit it? that's pretty sad really feels kinda cruel to include that in the story
Devilking1994 chapter 2 . 8/2
Ok so he isn't American just that he's been in America for a long time in their Duelling Circuit ok that makes sense however his last name still irks me surely the Purebloods could look him up and check for those that might have known him as a young man

If he had been a Potter no one would have batted a eye at him appearing

unrequited HP/MM so Minerva is going to fall in love with Harry at some point then? that's really sad she deserves some love
Devilking1994 chapter 1 . 8/1
1) Harry Fawkes? really that is idiotic I mean come on everyone knows that Dumbles has a Phoenix called Fawkes also it's a terrible last name why not introduce him to his Grandparents so he can keep his name as Potter
2) American? So how are you going to explain the utter lack of an American accent I mean really why do so many people do this it's so obviously a lie that even a complete and utter fool could see through it couldn't he have just said that Harry was home schooled with professional tutors that way he can be British
Skynet159 chapter 7 . 7/20
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/13
How's he going to teach dueling when he's such a weakling? Not only is he weak, you made him simp for Dumbledore, not sure how anyone made it past chapter 1 to give this a fav :s
alefrosier chapter 1 . 7/4
It's the second time I've read this story, I still think the last name you chose is awful, and there's still this thing about Harry even fighting a war for a while still running under Dumbledore's skirt and sucking Dumbledore's balls anyway that him being guilty of Harry having a horrible life, his story is very good the only negatives are listed above, I like how you made bellatrix and bellatrix and harry are my favorite couple too bad there are so few stories of them together
Zombiekiller666 chapter 1 . 5/19
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you
only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little
girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in
a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad
She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital
so the More-government decided that the best idea was
to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her,
as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine
thev were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony
for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of
her death she returns to the person that read this letter,
on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your
room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching
you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures
on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't.
This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to
ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the
best day of your life tomorrow.
Noy chapter 24 . 5/16
The scene between Sirius and Lily was frankly pretty bad. It came out of nowhere and felt incredibly forced. Why would Lily, that until now despised Sirius suddenly start opening up to him ? And Sirius wanted to approach her was also weird, you want me to believe that he knew no one inside the castle that could help him with potions ? And that he cares so much about his homework that he would approach a girl he had zero positive interactions with ? Oh ! But I forgot, last chapter Sirius suddenly decided he found her cute ! So I guess that makes perfect sense then !
Right... The whole thing is completely artificial, I got the feeling that James and Lily wouldn't be together since Croaker gave his explanation to Harry about how even if his parents end up with different people he would not stop to exist but if this was your attempt to start establishing a relationship between Lily and Sirius instead it was really poorly executed and I didn't believe it at all.
MasterYoda379 chapter 51 . 5/15
this is absolutely phenomenal. Great work. Hope it gets officially finished - unless that's how it was supposed to end...
Guest chapter 4 . 5/7
Lmao harry is pathetic as fuck
jimmy.oz chapter 51 . 4/23
Well hopefully at some point you come back and finish this story since there were still others that could have children plus the thing with Minerva needed to happen and his magic back. other than that it was a pretty good story that can still be added too.
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