Reviews for Narcissa's Chance
flys36 chapter 19 . 10/17
everyone seems to be falling in love pretty fast!
EdTheBeast chapter 51 . 10/8
An excellent must read Veil/Dimensional Time Travel story!
Lantzz chapter 39 . 9/6
'i wonder how the curse will get me'. earlier in the story you stated that riddle applied but Dumbledore didn't meet him as he offered harry the position immediately. when did he get the chance to curse the position if he hadn't been in the castle, also haven't mentioned the diadem yet but wasn't this when it was placed?
brownsuger808 chapter 9 . 8/8
I feel so sorry for Bellatrix. what is harry thinking
sparky40sw chapter 51 . 7/15
thanks for a very touching story
I appreciated the way Harry's big heart affected the behavior of so many of the characters.
warm regards
The Last Centurion 1 chapter 4 . 6/30
I am out, a war veteran and gets destroyed by a Barely out of Hogwarts Bellatrix
Seraphy64 chapter 48 . 6/17
Lmfao. Harry becomes master of death and still gets killed by Riddle. He manhandles him and struggles all the way dragging him to the castle instead of beating him to within an inch of his life and saving himself so much effort. Then gets himself overpowered anyway. He needs fucking original Sirius and Hecate to give him yet another chance at not failing.

When you MC needs author fiat to win you know you fucked up.
Seraphy64 chapter 20 . 6/17
This Harry survived the war for so long and didn't end up paranoid enough to take proper precautions with his home security? Pathetic. He even said that Bellatrix and others found his hideout at one point while in the shower. And he really shouldn't be surprised that things went to shit on holloween.
Rorand chapter 51 . 5/19
Thank you for the story.
HarGrif chapter 4 . 5/18
Wow, Harry would never sleep with bellatrix, you sick puppy!
scyfly chapter 3 . 4/22
the blowing wind charm... wind that doesnt blow is just air so its more like the blowing air charm.

story is filled with things like this, ill thought out and simply stated because it sounds nice or you want it to be not because any background made this the only logical outcome
scyfly chapter 1 . 4/22
using wands as if they are guns(single shot spells, so basicly a musket), worship of dumbledore the useless, teaching at hogwarts instead of fighting a war. you basicly use everything that is bad about hp
archangel7431 chapter 51 . 4/9
archangel7431 chapter 51 . 4/9
Wolvie26 chapter 51 . 3/4
Love it!
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