Reviews for Narcissa's Chance
HarGrif chapter 4 . 5/18
Wow, Harry would never sleep with bellatrix, you sick puppy!
scyfly chapter 3 . 4/22
the blowing wind charm... wind that doesnt blow is just air so its more like the blowing air charm.

story is filled with things like this, ill thought out and simply stated because it sounds nice or you want it to be not because any background made this the only logical outcome
scyfly chapter 1 . 4/22
using wands as if they are guns(single shot spells, so basicly a musket), worship of dumbledore the useless, teaching at hogwarts instead of fighting a war. you basicly use everything that is bad about hp
archangel7431 chapter 51 . 4/9
exciting
archangel7431 chapter 51 . 4/9
exciting
Wolvie26 chapter 51 . 3/4
Love it!
NaruhinaloverUA chapter 51 . 2/23
Very nice and interesting story. Keep up the great work.
DaSalvatore chapter 4 . 2/18
This chapter needed work. It comes across as you had the clever idea of what happens in Hogsmeade only without thinking if it made /sense/ from a plot point.

Harry's spent years fighting Riddle and Death Eaters to the point of him being the last surviving Order member. It's a Harry who has learned everything he knows from WAR. And he's against a Bellatrix who is nowhere near the level she would be in his original timeline.

So the only reason for Harry to lose is for this Bella to fall in love, kiss him and then get punished. In comic terms, it's plot induced stupidity. Which is a shame because the story is enjoyable so far.
Osborn123 chapter 4 . 1/31
So Harry got defeated by a young Bella? What the hell... That's beyond disappointeing. With this level of skill Harry should just commit suicide and save himself lots of troubles...
Scott Blake chapter 1 . 1/26
Something that i’ve noticed while reading is when they ask themselves if they love Harry and then say yes because he saved them in someway, it’s more an infuction than actual love, not the kind of love that Ginny had for him. Either that or the author doesn’t know how to make actual romance. It’s all good
Regtech chapter 51 . 1/25
Ty
TupanHD chapter 51 . 1/12
Nice. Please update this.
cassie chapter 34 . 12/20/2020
ugh now im gonna have nightmare of vampires ripping my throat
Xeus chapter 20 . 12/21/2020
P
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 6 . 12/20/2020
So Harry would still exist even if his parents end up with different partners. This chapter might be a prelude for Snape to end up with Lily. I might as well stop reading now. I don't like stories where Snape ends up with Lily. However, pairing is your prerogative as a writer. On the other hand, to read or not to read is my prerogative.
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