Reviews for At a Crossroads
LPK9 chapter 1 . 3/17/2018
Totally and completely and amazingly awesome.
summer164 chapter 1 . 3/17/2018
Glad to see that you are bsckm
BlizzardInAutumn chapter 1 . 3/17/2018
Please update.
I love this story.
gemellacastricis chapter 1 . 3/17/2018
Well, I'm not going to try and persuade you to do something, that doesn't feel good to you anymore. But I have to say, that you do seem to be a good writer. And yes, of course the characters feel of: you're PLAYING with them. You don't want to write the story just again. Sure, in the real story Luke is the strong young fledgling jedi, but if you write that again, it would just be a copy of the original. That's obviously not your plan. So - at least from my point of view - it's okay, if the characters are somewhat different, as long as they remain recognizable.
So don't beat yourself up to badly *pats gently on shoulder*. Your stories arent't bad, even if they feel so to you. Hopefully you'll still write this one to the end, because I for one would very much like to read the whole story.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/16/2018
I hope you will continue with your story. Enjoyed reading this story and look forward to seeing more. Great insight into how Luke felt after learning Vader was his father. Your a great writer!
Scififan33 chapter 1 . 3/16/2018
Poor Luke! Glad Leia knows now. Hope she can help a bit more. Bet Vader will be shocked when she reaches out to him as your summary says. This is good so far
BlizzardInAutumn chapter 1 . 3/16/2018
Please continue this.
It's great.
You are a great author.
knitzkampf chapter 1 . 3/16/2018
Please don't be so hard on yourself! This was great.
Murlily chapter 1 . 3/16/2018
Good story. Please continue. Wait did the Doc heard him tell Leia
MonicaOP chapter 1 . 3/16/2018
I have found that no matter what you think of the story they are always amazing. This delivers just the right amount of pain and sadness and the characterization is awesome! I'm looking forward to the rest of it! hugs! Be well
Kondoru chapter 1 . 3/16/2018
Its a very good start. Poor Luke, that relevation must have cut him up and will affect him for the rest of his life
romagen chapter 1 . 3/16/2018
For some reason, Shatter Me by Lindsey Stirling seems like a good song for this chapter, but I may be wrong. I can't wait to hear more! Thank you Shy Snootles for writing some of what I think are the best Star Wars fanfiction stories
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