Reviews for Eternal
Basil chapter 6 . 1/24
Wait, why does Zeus hate Percy now? During the First Born, Zeus had respect for Percy, what happened?
Begenz chapter 1 . 1/23
Wait I am confused, why is there a time jump between Firstborn and this story? What is going on
KINGShaheed chapter 3 . 9/15/2024
I can confidently say that someone who spent ten thousand years in Tartarus would not be satisfied with a simple apology. Especially after being betrayed by the people you fought with, protected, and even raised.

He should be more than a little livid...but it seems like he doesn’t mind much. It’s almost like he didn’t spend ten thousand years in Tartarus. Even if it’s been quite a while since then, anyone would be beyond angry about it still, even apathetic toward the Olympians at the least. Yet, he still gets sad after simply scolding Athena. He sees a few tears and now his heart is ‘breaking into pieces’. What? And to top it all off he’s still contemplating fighting for them. I don’t get it at all.

Loyalty be damned, ten thousand years in Tartarus is STILL ten thousand years in Tartarus.
KINGShaheed chapter 1 . 9/15/2024
Literally any other pairing than Percy and Artemis. Seriously.
connerhelton993 chapter 24 . 8/5/2024
This is one of the best Percy Jackson fanfics I've read and I've read a lot of them can you please continue to update it
Hollowdwrld chapter 23 . 7/18/2024
Even though you stopped updating this story, it was still really good! After reading firstborn: fall of troy, I had wondered what it would've been like for Percy to be in the main story of Percy Jackson, and this was exactly how I pictured it. Also, I loved the idea to change Percy Jackson name to Theseus/Theo Jackson so the audience wouldn't be confused.

And while I doubt it will happen, I hope that you come back to this story
Guest chapter 24 . 7/7/2024
This is a nice story but shouldn’t be marked as complete.
weirdhead chapter 6 . 4/28/2024
Think I have read this before. Trenchers... Familliar with it.
weirdhead chapter 1 . 4/27/2024
Zeus does control the weather... Air circulation... Etc.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2023
If he needs to eat but can’t be killed then what happens when he is starving? Does he just loose weight and stop when the fat and muscle is gone? Or is he just hangry and miserable until he’s fed?
PhoenixHarbinger chapter 16 . 10/18/2023
I've been thinking recently about this fanfic and I just realized that Percy isn't a demigod at all he doesn't have a human mother at all he's just like a god without domains
chaos chapter 4 . 6/20/2023
wait...what are his domains?
overall an amazing story very pleased with it so up the hard work.
lukejmontier1 chapter 24 . 4/21/2023
WTF!? This was bloody amazing why would you stop it. You should consider putting it up for adoption.
Krypton Writes chapter 23 . 12/29/2022
Dont update eternal, though PLEASE dont abandon your 3 story plan. ALL HAIL OP PERCIES!
Krypton Writes chapter 21 . 12/29/2022
and guess what? The immortal is Kronos. LoL
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