Reviews for Eternal |
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![]() ![]() Wait, why does Zeus hate Percy now? During the First Born, Zeus had respect for Percy, what happened? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait I am confused, why is there a time jump between Firstborn and this story? What is going on |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can confidently say that someone who spent ten thousand years in Tartarus would not be satisfied with a simple apology. Especially after being betrayed by the people you fought with, protected, and even raised. He should be more than a little livid...but it seems like he doesn’t mind much. It’s almost like he didn’t spend ten thousand years in Tartarus. Even if it’s been quite a while since then, anyone would be beyond angry about it still, even apathetic toward the Olympians at the least. Yet, he still gets sad after simply scolding Athena. He sees a few tears and now his heart is ‘breaking into pieces’. What? And to top it all off he’s still contemplating fighting for them. I don’t get it at all. Loyalty be damned, ten thousand years in Tartarus is STILL ten thousand years in Tartarus. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Literally any other pairing than Percy and Artemis. Seriously. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of the best Percy Jackson fanfics I've read and I've read a lot of them can you please continue to update it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even though you stopped updating this story, it was still really good! After reading firstborn: fall of troy, I had wondered what it would've been like for Percy to be in the main story of Percy Jackson, and this was exactly how I pictured it. Also, I loved the idea to change Percy Jackson name to Theseus/Theo Jackson so the audience wouldn't be confused. And while I doubt it will happen, I hope that you come back to this story |
![]() ![]() This is a nice story but shouldn’t be marked as complete. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Think I have read this before. Trenchers... Familliar with it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Zeus does control the weather... Air circulation... Etc. |
![]() ![]() If he needs to eat but can’t be killed then what happens when he is starving? Does he just loose weight and stop when the fat and muscle is gone? Or is he just hangry and miserable until he’s fed? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been thinking recently about this fanfic and I just realized that Percy isn't a demigod at all he doesn't have a human mother at all he's just like a god without domains |
![]() ![]() wait...what are his domains? overall an amazing story very pleased with it so up the hard work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WTF!? This was bloody amazing why would you stop it. You should consider putting it up for adoption. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dont update eternal, though PLEASE dont abandon your 3 story plan. ALL HAIL OP PERCIES! |
![]() ![]() ![]() and guess what? The immortal is Kronos. LoL |