SINnamon roll… really?

Pussy-Cats

How can you just skip over the chance to show how midoriya studied his classmates and defeats them quirkless? I’m disappointed

The goddamn jojo references

AYOOOOOOO?

Ayooooo?

No shit that’s his weakness HES MADE OUT OF WOOD!

Wonder how long todoroki will survive since the more quirks that’s stockpiled the lower the lifetime for someone who originally had a quick before one for all

Also please wheneve you write a story, either get someone else to proof read it or read it aloud to yourself, because spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes can and will put most people off of your story

For anyone reading this, never put author notes or context in between chapters, it ruins the flow of the story and can easily disengage people from your story. It can easily tell the difference between a good writer and a bad one (No offence to the writer). Only put author notes at the beginning or the end of the chapter and try to keep them short and on the point, long ANs are jarring.

Who ever you are, I do why but if this was the official storyline I would not be sad[

Aizawa is really put of character here and just stupid.

His reasoning behind letting Izuku off on the exam is his suspicion based on his composure. By that logic, shouldn't he also be suspicious of Shoto?

But besides him, as it would stand, if Aizawa were to be suspicious, it would be far more logical for him to actually test Izuku's capabilities in the examination to get a better grasp on the situation with regards to the suspicious individual. But instead he gives him a pass, eliminating a chance to his quirk in practice? (which, by the way, would have been listed in the quirk registry).

Out of character and stupid, but I'll keep entertaining my curiosity for a while longer. Just a pet peeve of mine when people write Aizawa wrongly.

a better name is usagi which is just rabbit anyway

loved the Hellsing abridged reference

This was so cute. I love the beggining with the texting, and the whole date just warmed my heart. Toga's confessoin was beatiful. And the end was pretty funny. I love the way you discribed the whole thing so i could see it in my mind. I was watching this fanfic on youtube but this chapter wasn't included so i'm glad i went and read it myself.