Good chapter keep it up

Good first chapter and this one is short I can't believe it

This story had potential but you really make it so repetitive. Every chapter naruto is called the strongest on the planet or defeats gods and yet no matter what power level he has whether he can destroy a car or a planet the fight ends with him in a coma or broken beyond repair despite having multiple healing factors and he sacrafices himself in every situation he gets in even if it causes genocide…. bruh what is wrong with you. He has clones, superspeed etc stop writing this bullshit its retarded and repetitive

This story was published in 2018 not 2008 why the fuck do people STILL use the "beaten" trope like it's not the most overused cliche there is? Instantly that makes this story not worth reading, as the rest of it will probably be filled with dogshit of equal levels of stupid.

I can't believe you did Bucky dirty like that. I hope that Cap will be okay and Natasha comes back somehow. No offense, I love this story but some of the decisions that were made I am not crazy about.

FUCK YEAH! GET IT BUDDY!

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Well i hope that it gets the Naruto Nats pairing. You had one of the best starts before the plot unravelled it.

Good, I am glad you go back to this kind of stories.
I really liked this one

Return of the king let’s go. Can’t wait to see what you cook next and I know it’s going to be a banger.

I'm glad to hear you will be giving this story another shot, I enjoyed this story a lot.

wow really can't wait cuz, i really love your writing and stories. so thank you

this was a good story mate.

yes i want this story to continue but tbh i like agent wiskers of shield a liitle more as a title but story is great keep up the good work man

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