Reviews for Father and Son
Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2015
I hate any overly mushy fic, but this is an abomination! Wrong on multiple levels! Not even frieza was this wierd!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2015
Im sorry...wait no im not not! This is wrong! No yaoi, incest, or pedephillia! Vegeta is not gay, trunks is not gay! I know this fic is old...but it should be burned and forgotten, you can write...youve got talent...but its going to the wrong places! Everything i listed is enough to make a fic dead to me, even one of them would do it! Just no, trunks even mentions he has a girlfriend, and vegeta does indeed love bulma in his own way, bjt this wrong, just NO!
claustro-phobia chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
I have this rule that if I read a story, I must review it. Basically, all the same things apply from my last review.

I love your writing, and this piece particularly.
david chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
There FAGS And i love DBZ They are cold blooded warriors not soft faggish bunnys
jamiefin chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
no sequel. What happens when Trunks finally does grow up he goes and tells goku and he kicks this ass and send that mf to hell
jamiefin chapter 1 . 8/29/2009
hink chapter 1 . 9/29/2007
lovely. poor vegeta and mirai trunks.
Frank chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
That's sick.

Incest and Yaoi are fine but pedophelia is just sick.
AcrylicDisaster chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
O.O HeeHee!

That was sweet
Omega Weapon chapter 1 . 9/4/2004
Gozilla chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
Great story! Good work! Thanks for writing! -
kys chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
yuk this is sick vegeta isnt gay but yuk that is nasty saying he wonts to molester trunks. U HAV A SICK FUCKING MIND!
baitfish chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
Even though the conventional side of me is telling me that this is icky, I still respect the quality of the writing. This was a good story.

I don't blame Vegeta for wanting his own son. Mirai Trunks can make even the straightest men want him. :P
mahougirl chapter 1 . 4/21/2003
I think I'll probably go to hell for this (if not something else), but I really, really dig Trunks/Vegeta yaoi fic, and yours is very well written, and explores a bit about how their relationship could go in this direction. I think its interesting how Vegeta chooses to rationalize the relationship, by thinking of Mirai Trunks as a different person than baby Trunks. You should do a sequel. What happens when Trunks finally does grow up?
megan chapter 1 . 4/2/2003
WOW! Very good story! I love TxV fics!

Why don't you put it up at Dragonball Incest egroup? group/Dragonball_xIncestx/

I'm sure they'll love it!
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