Reviews for A Fish Out of Water (ASOIAF SI) |
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![]() ![]() lol. So they're the reason Sansa is still in a horrible situation, yet the responsibility is put on him. Disgusting. |
![]() ![]() Man, Robb really never gave a shit about Sansa. This is sadly in character. |
![]() ![]() Ramsay is now without the Roose leash, and loose alone in the North. That can't be good. |
![]() ![]() Nice. Had totally forgotten about her. You stick to your butterflies well. |
![]() ![]() This seems a little off tbh. Renly is nothing without the Tyrells, really. They're the ones who should be negotiated with. |
![]() ![]() He let Walder Frey blackmail a marriage out of the Starks, well knowing it was coming? Is he a complete moron? Not only could he have stopped this from happening, a Frey/Stark Lord/King marriage will threaten the Tully's power to an extent. Just 'cause you let Tyrion's fate play out does not mean you're not sticking too close to canon so far. Your MC seems a bit lacking in the head department. |
![]() ![]() I still don't understand why he wouldn't pre-empt Clegane's party in the Riverlands. He knew it was coming, but he's just letting his lands get razed anyway? What good is his future knowledge if all he does is wait for things to happen? He honestly feels like a downgrade from canon Edmure so far, both personality- and competency-wise. |
![]() ![]() -"I suspect Robert and Ned were going to meet their cannon fates." Shit. Wasn't it a boar and beheading in canon? A cannon seems excessive. |
![]() ![]() Did he just send away his dying father's only doctor? |
![]() ![]() -"Price is no matter, get the best." Well, hello fAegon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A well written finfic with reincarnation genre. Hope to see more chapters at a higher release. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Had to reread the whole story, so fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I liked what you did with Westerlands - it was pragmatic. Maybe it's time for peace and new discoveries brought from our world... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great chapter. I'm really enjoying how small changes in canon are creating larger ripples in how things work out in westeros. |
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