Reviews for A Fish Out of Water (ASOIAF SI) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() damn in edmure body of all people...the floppy fish hahaha |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very interesting story. I laughed a lot when Edmure uses his secret weapon to bring the many squabbling lords into his side. "Call center representative" LOL as one who had that job before I can concur that's how to deal with lousy customers. I should think that there should be a lull in the fighting now. Everyone is busy licking their wounds that the Riverlands can afford a few months worth of peace before hostilities spring up again. Maybe Edmure can use his modern knowledge to strengthen his position? Looking forward for more chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Might this be on-going? Its a really good read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update! |
![]() ![]() Great story! Really hope it isn't dead and you continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Edmure is being very smart here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like how the self-insert screws up on occasion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Jim’s promotion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good fic, I'm sad to see it's been so long since updating. I do like the fact that the MC is basically your average Joe with book knowledge as most SI's are always some kind of genius who uplifts their territories to a ridiculous amount. It makes it more realistic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is slightly more realistic than Edmure Tully hoping to hatch a dragon but not by much. This idiot couldn't be bothered to check the date or any number of events like who the Hand of the King was? Instead he raises troops which could've bankrupted House Tully before the war starts leaving them vulnerable when they needed to be strong the most. Reading about someone who has no idea how medieval warfare works, sucks. Though I guess that's exactly what an SI is? It might be mildly interesting if this is a take on how even knowing the future can't help you if you're dumb but I'm not interested in reading that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just binge read this entire story and I must say it has been quite a satisfying and very entertaining read and I commend you for it |
![]() ![]() ![]() To see Jorahs face when he hears the riverlands and westerlands have already sworn for Dany. He will go wtf is going on in Westeros. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Props to Kevan for being willing to compromise, and for our hero for offering it in the first place. I look forward to actually seeing the woman Edmure's going to marry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() At the end of the day, as much as you might conflict with family, you still wish them the best: it's good that it shone through. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm honestly impressed that he's managed to keep his secrets so well tbh |