Reviews for Alleycat's Way
Danny Barefoot chapter 1 . 8/20/2019
This short, straightforward piece captures a great many elements of the tough and violent Shadowrun world. The flashbacks and action are simple enough that they fit very smoothly together, and quite intimate with Alleycat's school life and the detailed scene of Sophia's death. Alas, what kind of parallel universe Sophia came from has to be an intriguing story for another day. The paragraph about Hendron has a sentence that uses 'mindless' twice. You could possibly add a short sentence as well about how Hendron was presumably killed? The spacing between paragraphs on the FFN version of this story makes it much easier to read than the AO3 version.