The chapter almost knocked me out laughing. Especially Shanks. It's funny and mind-blowing and very original.

I also like the idea of this harem of royalty for Luffy forming

I am loving the story

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Just replace One Piece: Luffy's Mother is WHO? with the actual name of the story.

Damn.
Now I imagine Big Mum trying to force Luffy to marry Reijin, only for him to casually announce that Hancock wants him to do that all the time too and ask what marriage is? xD

That was awesome I loved the chapter and I can't wait for whatever happens next stay safe:)

Ah...Katakuri...already back and having to solve all his family's problems...since Jinbe wasn't there to pick up the slack! And of course he's got the instincts to realize what an utter DISASTER is on the horizon!

On a small note, I've sneezed underwater...and let me tell you...not pleasant. Feeling Jinbe's pain!

And those BMP already dividing up SHP like trading cards or pets...ooh so many of them in for a RUDE awakening! Been awhile since I've even thought about that family's messed up dynamic...but it's ALL coming back to me now! Yikes!

Don't know if I said this before, but I'm appreciating all this extra time for the SHP to bond with their Grand Fleet members...considering half of them never even met the Grand Fleet! Robin just TROLLING gives me life! And gotta appreciate this RANDOM Barto Club member being elevated for wedding and divorce purposes!

Oh Lord...did not expect Denjiro to have have THIS MUCH of a 'plot bomb' so soon...but I think leaving picks for freakin' YAMATO counts as such! And being considered a New 'Commander'...intriguing.

AH-HAH! Here comes Yamato for ADVENTURE! Can't wait to see his contributions to the INSANITY of the plot...or him reuniting with Ace...that'll be sweet!

Til Next Time...

Sweet chapter.

More Luffy

The plot thickens! Glad to see this story getting updated bro. Can't wait for the next chapter my dude! :)

luffys charlotte name is Amai?

Great to see a new update for this story, starting with Big Mom going into one of her hunger pangs and taking 40 years of life to one of her sons, you know an usual Sunday in Whole Cake Island, with the actual head of the family Katakuri intervening in time to end the chaos and bring Big Mom to her senses. And then moments later after organizing in a giffy how to clean up the mess with his siblings he goes to finally report to his mother about how it went when he took Luffy, with something in his gut telling him that there will be problems as his biological little brother (in this story LOL) proofs to be really powerful and not someone who would just fall in line for the Charlotte Family, plus he mentions his attachment to Sanji when he told her that maybe it would be for the best to not kill him and of course she didn’t want none of that so yeah there will be problems…especially when a homie mentions about the honorable guests that have to arrive with Big Mom being ignorant of what the heck Luffy has unleashed while Katakuri feels a shiver run down his spine because of feeling a “disturbance in the force” about it XP.

In Zou all of the allies are still organizing about how they will separate with a group going to rescue Luffy and Sanji while the other goes towards Wano already, the Whitebeard Pirates except Ace of course abstaining because of how this could mean declaring war and all while Raizo goes with the group of Whole Cake because of how his abilities will be more useful there, and the Revolutionary Army members being more covert or claiming to be for another reason because of bad publicity and all, also pointing out the suspicion that there’s something planned for the Reverie…:P, and so with a toast and a happy Chopper since Milk is going to accompany them much to the Straw Hats and Mama Bear Robin’s suspicion everyone is ready for action. Same in Wano as Denjiro is still doing his thing as well while in incognito, things are slowly cooking up even if there’s still a while for things to blow up!

Speaking of things cooking up the Red Hair Pirates have a “peculiar” development as well with their Transponder Snail ringing and Yasopp being forced to step up because the newbies are apprehensive of taking the call, of course the GodFather (man that made me crack up XD) all drunk takes it and gives it to Shanks who is feeling left out after knowing how Mihawk, the one calling, has been invited to this wedding for Luffy and now knowing of his ex-rival having as plus one “Luffy’s Mother Figure” which he assume is Makino so it’s time to throw the hands between them…of course he wouldn’t know about Dadan when she met Luffy later and all, welp things just escalated EVEN more for that wedding! Because not only this happens but the Marines who were listening to the call now think that Shanks and Mihawk are marrying, and all of this is really turning into pandemonium and I’m loving it.

That brief moment with Caesar panicking about going to Wano was great too and especially with Chopper beating him up unconscious for it, don't interrupt his time with Milky idiot :V, while in Onigashima Denjiro arrives at last in front of Kaido and his crew after having taken those serious loses recently and he’s all nervous of what it could mean for him since the Emperor doesn’t seem to be in a good mood…then he’s told that what the strongest creature wants is to become a member of the Flying Seven now as well as in time getting rid of Orochi and of course in spite of some things that he has to take care of the spies accepts because well…it’s just perfect to make the stab all the more deep when the time comes, cool how things aligned in Denjiro as well as the others here with him even getting a Devil Fruit (thank goodness it’s not a SMILE, I really don't think the risk is worth taking when the success turns you into an abomination for life) which he accepts even if he finds sickening that he has to accept one from his mortal enemy.

Now in the Going Luffy-Senpai the Barto Club is busy preparing just in case that their idol does decide to go through the wedding, that’s right Bartolomeo prepare for all the situations possible for Luffy XD, while a nervous Usopp and a VERY amused Robin observe the lovable idiots preparing for it but of course these (kinda) reformed mobsters have no idea of how to prepare a wedding at all, luckily the youngest does have a bit of an idea and it’s super cute that they’re all praising him for it while also asking him about other aspects like the speech of the best man (not an issue for Bartolomeo to do one for his god I bet) and then the archeologist fans the flames by asking what will they prepare if Luffy decides to divorce and just leaves, what a troll she’s being here but if it helps her deal with her worries about Luffy being alright who are we to deny her right? I certainly wouldn’t when I’m basically a member of the Barto Club too in all of their fanboyism ;P.

While this happens back in Whole Cake Island the siblings talk to themselves as their big brother has his conversation with Big Mom about their new brother and who will take care of him and all that jazz, also if he will be killed by Big Mom for his rebellious behavior from eating her sweets to challenging her with them being quite sure about it until they think about his accomplishments as well as how cool and useful his crew is and becoming eager to have them as underlings (careful with the one calling Robin old though…she wouldn’t like that and IS feeling quite mischievous right now XD), not going to happen but hey that’s the Straw Hat charisma right there there’s nothing they could do. Back in Onigashima again, lots of jumps but this is to be expected LOL, with Kiyoshiro returning now from the party and thinking to himself of what his new position inside of Kaido’s crew means and then he meets Yamato and sees first hand how Kaido treats even his own offspring and how he truly sees his crew at the end of the day, and so the retainer of Oden in disguise gives “them” the keys and leaves before the fireworks start!

With the dummies of the Barto Club as well as a Cavendish now having the spotlight they argue about when to declare that Luffy is going to be the Pirate King in their speech while Usopp and Chopper literally observe while eating popcorn and Nami joining them moments later, of course the sniper and doctor also start to argue about it while Nami thinks that “resolving it” as usual would make them look bad but luckily Robin arrives to observe the madness proceed and continue the mayhem too, not before she also eats the sweet popcorn of course, as she comments towards Cavendish that he’s admitting that Luffy will be the King and making more of a mess and also telling Usopp about getting scammed for the treats which make him leave the bags of popcorn alone and defenseless for the ladies to wolf down…yep very devious of the archeologist and greedy, you’re going to an island full of sweets miss ;P. To end the chapter now Who’s Who departs to find out about who killed Jack expecting that it can help in promoting him, while also noting about Denjiro’s care and him expecting quite the “shock” at knowing what the Emperor plans to do with Wano, and some Headliners accompany with Yamato also getting into the ship…oops LOL.

So yeah fantastic chapter from both of you once again, I’ll be waiting for more as always. Thanks for all of your hard work as always!

Long time no read, hope all is well!

I just had a funny idea, imagine is Jack's Mammoth Fruit appeared on the Going Luffy and Usopp ate it? He already has the nose for it!
Plus, imagine him using his trunk for shooting his ammo or water blasts.

Fantastic chapter, the build up that's been added and the chaos that is associated with the Straw Hats is wonderful.