|Reviews for Burning Ashes|
| cupofcakes chapter 18 . 6/5/2019
I am truly sorry for my late review. I’m really excited to see your update though. A love triangle in the making? I think that will be interesting. Happy to see my boys and their playful argument!
| dreamerdash chapter 18 . 5/30/2019
Aww.. I really hope you’ll find your inspiration and excitement to continue with the story. Anyhow, cute love triangle potential between Kalee, Cal, and Cecilia. I’m so excited to see their development. It’s adorable how shy but excited Cal was when he’s talking about Cecilia. I’m also happy to see Everett and Cal get along so well. They’ve come a long way!
| tyozzie123 chapter 18 . 5/28/2019
Oof, I like the tension between Nova and Everett. And oh my God I'm sobbing. My poor Kalee baby! At least she acted put together, wanting to keep Cal as a friend. Oh my godddddd. I feel that though Kalee, I really do. And Cal with a secret garden? Hells yes please. So cute and adorable and ahhh I love the little cinnamon roll. I also love their banter, so much, especially, "this friendship was built on neither of us being 'outside' people". Can't wait to see how each situation turns out. Hopefully Cal realizes Kalee is better for him, but hey I'm not biased or anything.
| sevenzeroseven chapter 18 . 5/28/2019
ahh shit here we go again im buckling in you thot
i see those delicious descriptions of yours in kalee's section heh i know everyone is hardcore kallum but i really was waiting for you to yeet the ship and YOU CAME THROUGH omg
kalee's crush is devastating tbh like she really is head over heels and that's a phat mood of course but the scene leading up to cal's confession was fantastique. you really phoned in on the anxious feeling leading up to it and the way you sneakily led us astray by possibly making us think he's got the hots for kalee whEN HE DOESN'T
speaking of omg omg
we already know i love cecilia with my heart and soul so i support her snatching *both* of the schreave boys wholeheartedly i wouldn't even be surprised if the selected girls started falling for her what a queen. CAL really talked to her once and was ready to lose it all
i also think liking cecilia, who is a lot more *mature* in a way and experienced would make sense for him at least for now (tbh who wouldn;t like her) and kalee is more in the childhood friend trope even if she isn't a childhood friend, she's just that sweet that cal probably doesn't see anything romantic there? yet? i don't know what you're planning sigh
nova is a badass we been knew and her attitude is really refreshing in contrast to ev's previous dates which is probably why you chose to write her. not gonna lie, her manners are hawt and we stan. she's out of ev's league srry bby
ALSO ALSO the scene with ev's valet shows a nice comparison again between him and cal, cal who is a little more considerate and aware of those around him. ev sorta has an excuse because he's been sipping the applesauce too long but i think it's a nice change now that he's kinda learning about others around him
that statement didn't make sense but just let it happen okay lol
ALSO ALSO calxceliaxev in the future? maybe? because ev is gonna slide into her dms i know that for sure she's just too charming. i don't know why i absolutely worship her but it's just like that ok
watch her deny both of them lol
i'm so glad you're still writing i know it takes a lot out of you hun you're doing great kiss kiss
| dreamerdash chapter 17 . 4/28/2019
I feel like Everett’s date can’t keep getting better. He easily connect with the girls, each in different but unique way. He’s such a charmer! The baking cook-off was such a cute date idea btw!
| cupofcakes chapter 17 . 4/27/2019
I like how competitive both Eleanor and Everrett were! Even though Everrett probably didn’t have a chance to win. Hahaha. Thank you for the date!
| tyozzie123 chapter 17 . 4/21/2019
I LOVED this chapter! Maggie and Stef and Elanor are so cute together as friends. Also, this date was adorable. AND EV Making those cupcakes his family was so CUTE I AM DYING FROM ADORABLENESS! Tbh, not sure how I feel about no Kalleum, but also, like, kind of glad I didn't see my boy Cal break down today? Hopefully next chapter is easier for you, I know this one was a little rough in the process.
| Slyther chapter 17 . 4/21/2019
Need to see that angst
Thanks for joining me on Easter Uploads
| sevenzeroseven chapter 16 . 3/25/2019
YOU THOUGHT I FORGOT BUT I DIDN'T HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
i'm so tired out by my reviews that i just did but i'm not letting this little maggot of guilt leech onto me for another second, no siree.
OOF, I liked this Captain dude for no reason. The deep talk in the shower made me laugh a little, but it's interesting seeing a perspective that isn't from the royal family or the Selected.
Dang, Isla and Bella are really out here. I'm still not sold on Isla entirely. Or am I? I don't recall? The articles were funny and I think the favorites apply to the *real* readers as well. COUGH CECILIA IS MY QUEEN AND OWNS MY WHOLE ASS COUGH
Tbh, please give Everett at least three motorcycles
I'll rebel until this happens
Where are they, egg
AND HE WEARS FLANNEL. who is this kid omg, where is his leather jacket and ripped jeans. what a cutie, how can anyone be afraid when he's so soft like wow, soft ev, soft-stan ev everyone. hard-stan cal is the only way to go, obviously...
Ev is pretty naturally flirty, what a hoe. But, real tea. I think I enjoyed the convo at the end of the chapter the most since I could perfectly get the tone and vibe you were going for and it ended on a playful note which I liked.
You have many, many dates left and I'm praying for you tbh. Maybe a break in the middle for brotherly duck hunting? huhuehuheufuufu. Love you even though you neglect me smh ;-;
| GreenWithAwesome chapter 16 . 3/7/2019
Short review today, but once again, you did a great job at characterising and dialogue. Particularly Aaaron and Ramsey, and Bella and Isla. Their relationships are so different but they both share mutual respect. Also liked the date; it was nice seeing Everett chill, even for a little while (still can't imagine him in flannel though looool).
Great chapter. Keep writing. :D
| cupofcakes chapter 16 . 3/2/2019
I like how different each dates that you write. While it was hot and heavy with Lena previously, it’s sweet and playful with Isla. She seemed to have a complicated past despite her carefree demeanor. The thing I like the most from their interaction is that they both are comfortable enough to mock and tease each other. Can’t wait to see what you planned next!
| dreamerdash chapter 16 . 2/28/2019
So many things I love in this chapter. I love Captain Aaron’s perspective and POV. It builds up background information on what’s currently happening, it reminds me that not everything inside the castle matters most. And of course.. I love love love Bella and Isla’s friendship! It’s amazing how blunt and real their interactions are! Though I might be bias, but the date is beyond amazing! Finally a chapter where things doesn’t end badly for Everett! Hahaha. I love their flirty banters throughout the date. They’re so good together. The thing that I love the most is that you didn’t end things all happily and hopeless romantic. I like how they have a serious real talk at the end. It might not be something that’s easy to talk about, but it’s what I think makes their interaction and relationship real. Thaank youu for spoiling us with quick update Olivia! You’re the best!
| tyozzie123 chapter 16 . 2/28/2019
I loved this chapter! Isla's date with him was so cute. And omg, Bella and Isla as besties are amazing. Also, that poor soldier. Those sevens and eights, omg, Jonathan smh. Dang the lessons are super important I see, lowkey glad Kalee would probably not have much trouble over the history lessons, especially Eirwen Seylace's lmao. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| DauntlessThreeRavens chapter 16 . 2/27/2019
I love it still! I can’t wait for the next chapter, and I’m so glad Cara got some Pov time. I can’t wait to see the girls attempt to study together! And I love how her personality is coming off. It’s just how I wanted her to be
| Slytherwitch chapter 16 . 2/27/2019
Eggtavia, you spoil us.