Reviews for Never Forgive
sabrina michaels chapter 1 . 8/8
Loved it...
twilightobession chapter 1 . 4/11
Very interesting. Different than the other one I read. Can't wait to read all the entries.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4
Love this story
kinnik chapter 1 . 4/5
Oh, great casting. I always love to see Peter and this was great. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing this story.
AnakinSmom chapter 1 . 4/5
Ouch! Never mess with a Whitlock!
jen5795 chapter 1 . 4/4
Interesting story, I'd like to know what happens next.
MiccaF chapter 1 . 4/4
Awesome! Loved it!
it's simply me n you chapter 1 . 4/4
I always enjoy a Peter and Bella story. Putting them together as the bosses was a great idea. Enjoyed
YourVixen chapter 1 . 4/3
Interesting, this entry actually inspired me to try B&P story's nice entry
01Katie chapter 1 . 3/29
Loved it.
Iklepixie chapter 1 . 3/29
Good luck in the contest.
pipelynn chapter 1 . 3/26
Whew~ bad to the bone!
ggb-luma chapter 1 . 3/26
This is my first P/B fic,and I really,really enjoyed it..
Bella was a little bada**.
You should definitely consider continuing your fic
debslmac chapter 1 . 3/25
:) loved this
Ajfflady chapter 1 . 3/24
Intense. I really liked the strong and in charge Bella. You covered so much in such few words. Great mob one shot.
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