Yeah! Go Pyrrha!

Qrow is Ruby's dad theory- really?
Also, nicely done with explaining Jaune's semblance and using it to bring back Amber.

Unlikely

an odd start but interesting

the characters seem to be completely fine after the battle (aside from Yang) especially Pyrrha who took killing ozpin, getting two auras messing her up and scream in pain and killing penny and causing the invasion like it's another Friday night.

still interesting but make the characters get effected from such traumatic experiences.

At first, I came here to see what would have happened if Jaune had actually done his job. What I got was more of a comedy than I was hoping for, but a good comedy nonetheless. Nice work.

That finisher was metal as fuck.