Reviews for Hidden Among the Trees Above the Dead |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Bwaaaaaaa! Poor Teddy! Another great chapter. Thank you for sharing this story with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my, I feel bad for Remus and Tonks...but at least that got to see her and know there son is safe...thatbwas have been a huge relief them...please let Dobbyband the Potter, Black and Longbottom elves are safe and can help them..did she put any wards around her forest that she claimed..to keep any walkers away.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hyacinth.. such a weird name. i get its a flower but it simply seems like you went out of you way to give a weird name instead of going 'cliche'. sometimes cliche is simply better for a reason. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg! please tell me you'll update soon please please please please please! |
![]() ![]() Please update this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() First two chapters I just can't get through. Too many mistakes and too much disjointed explanation. Cool idea though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quantas coisa que cabia nas bolsas mano, se ninguém desconfiar eles é muito burro. Quase que ela tirou um carro de lá kk |
![]() ![]() ![]() There is an awful lot of redundancy and pretty much irrelevant things, compounded by the small but in great amount grammatical errors, that makes reading this a slog. I'd advise either getting an editor on to this, or if you've gotten better, go back and re-do atleast chapter one, as slogging through the first chapter of a new story is likely to make people drop it right there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you have a sign of an impending zombie apocalyspe and you are filthy rich you go ham with your purchases. You buy solar powered generators and back up generators a plenty to power whatever you need long into the future. You buy plant beds or materials for plant beds, seeds, clean dirt and whatever else you need to grow your own food. You absolutely keep away from other people so you have food and supplies to last you through the roughest seasons. And like she has a thought too you stay off the ground (both you and your equipment/supplies) so the dead simply can't reach you. And if you have magic like Hyacinth you absolutely use it to the full extent you know to, to hide yourself, your shelter and your equipment and supplies from wandering humans |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep it coming please it is good I need more |
![]() ![]() Dobby is still alive, right? Because I imagine that he could probably find a whole hoard of them. Not to mention he was always loyal to Harry until the end in canon. I was actually about to ask about Teddy until the end of this chapter. It’s still sad that She had to lose more family. Please update soon I absolutely adore this fanfic and it’s hard to find good ones that are updated regularly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A LOVELY STORY! THANK YOU FOR YOUR HARD WORK! |
![]() ![]() Que like 500 popping up everywhere all at once... Like Naruto Shadow Clones! Some of them bring babies/kids of all ages and Beings. Those Habitat trunks could be about to come in really handy. |
![]() ![]() first several chapters indicate her life sob story and strong independence. All of that was blown away in this chapter. Getting pushed over and the reality that no one is questioning the amount if items and weapons are in the bag. lol. |