I really love this story and hope this isn’t the last chapter

you know, as far as discontinued endings go, this was a nice place for it to end. Orochimaru finally gets the full story, we get a nice sweet moment, with a few losse threads still hanging around

The first chapter kinda explains how you’d interpret the story. There are numerous quotes and actions that I shrugged off in favour of the plot. Then I reread the story and then those lines started to make sense, tbh the only reason I understood was because we were given a gracious amount of context.

Though incomplete, I loved reading it.

I’m so obsessed with this. You’re so talented !

It was good until the previous chapter.
Though, the flashbacks were a bit obnoxious.

Urgh.

Broodmate? Really?

Maybe next you'll have Orochimaru talk with a hiss, too.

He's a person, not a snake.

So wholesome. I love it so so much. You're so goddamned talented. Ugh

holy shit this is so good, nothing that i was expecting, in the best way possible. Your writhing is REALLY amazing, i’m so impressed by the way you write haruka, the way she talks and when she has her episodes, you can understand the confusion and is really natural the way reality and her flashbacks mends together, her personality is so unique and i am in love how you portray orochimaru,(im a sucker for misundestood orochimaru, and i think explain much more of his personality in cannon, and you did a really good job at it, especially the little hints or “thought’s” that orochi has on what he could have become without her) his parents and all the characters in general, they are so on point! hope you continue this history, i really love this (sorry for any mistake here, english isnt my first language)

this chapter is so damn funny! HAHAHAH

I enjoyed this fic very much, rlly tnx for sharing. ur da best!

Author, why not just add a some romance pleasr

Where are you? Come back... I need mooooreeeeeeee I really need it... It's a very unique fic... 1st time reading one with Oro as the main character and I love Haruka... So plz come back with new chapters...I want to see haru chan kill rat king... Really hate danzo cus he's the reason shisui died, Itachi lived a miserable life then died T.T

holy shit I need more of these fics, they are so amazing and captivating to read. But of course, only you author-chan can write stuff like this that never bores us readers. Thank you! Looking forward to more!

Ps. Wished people understand orochimaru's character more (he is the best and I love him so much)

I love this but im sad its been, from what it looks like, discontinued.