Harry giving Hogwarts money is simply stupid. He is 14! McGonnogal should give herself a 10M raise and retire to celebrate Harry’s stupidity.

Interesting plot and good use of characters.

Author: Thank you for sharing your stories

When we going to get to the vengeance? I'm ready

I am surprised that Harry did not yank all of the family magic out of Sirius for his betrayal. I am surprised the god-father oath did not kill him.

Good Story, but I need to point out one glaring mistake. You have Fred and George being exiled for drowning Umbridge. She already was kissed earlier in Gringotts.

George and Fred Weasley were exiled from Britain for drowning WHO in a jinx gone wrong? I thought the Dementors got her in the bank...?

Good work! I just read Lilly's Diary and I liked so much I looked up your previous works. This obviously one of your earlier stories. But it still was fun to read. Find yourself a good editor. There are too many sticklers out that love to zap you for minor errors. Thank you!

I am ABSOLUTELY in LOVE with your Stories! *bows his head in respect for the Author*

for sharing

Great story

How did the twins attack Umbridge if she had been kissed by dementors?

Interesting story but I think you killed Umbridge twiceI can't stand her either but I tink that's a bit much.
First a Dementor ate her soul (did she even have one?) and then you let the Weasley twins drown her...

Quite an interesting story. I liked it very much. Thank you for your contribution to the fan fiction.

Wow, nother great story. Thanks for sharing!

I like how Hermione didn't even rate an epilogue here. Without Harry to give her a spotlight and Dumbledore to puff her up, she wasn't anyone worth thinking about :D.