Excellente fiction
Merci pour la lecture

Hi. Thanks for your amazing stories, I love independant Harry and Dumbledore/Weasley bashing. :)

You killed umnridge twice in this. Once by dementor and then by the twins with drowning.

I like how you never even mention who he married or any children names. Also my favorite part is how Umbridge died twice and lots of names were mispelled? Was that on purpose, because it was hilarious. This is about the max length any fixit story should ever be anyway, so kudos for that, and kudos for wacky dementor nonsense. The best dementor nonsense goes to nonjon still, but I will put you in second place!

I like AU that turns canon on its head. The belief that purebloods are the elite would have been the bedrock of such an insular society and I can see many of the so called light muggle loving wizards actually having a well constructed 'cover' around the gullible muggleborns entering their world. Certainly when the truth became know, for many it would be too late.

The author is really good at crafting a fast paced, action filled story.

Brilliant story

You do realize that killed Deloris Umbridge in Gringott, so the twins could't have killed her later. Also, it's Pansy Parkinson not Patsy. In addition, Harry's broom was Nimbus 2000 not a 1000.

You had Delores Umbridge being kissed by dementors during the kissing of the cup in 1993; so she wouldn't have been alive in 1995 to be drowned by a Weasley jinx gone wrong.

It is almost impossible to say anything more than great story.

Okay ... I think I would have preffered if you created more chapters since you already have chapters in your storys.

It would be easier to read if you do not have all day and would need to search the last paragraph.

Usually I would have liked to read more but I can noz say what I want to know. It is nice that you didn't say his wifes name. We can imagine someone from Hogwarts or maybe someone he met later in life.

At first I was happy that you let Sirius go away without much fuss. He was free but gone and Harry didn't need him.

In the last part we met Sirius again and I do not know why but I think he wasn't right in his mind after Askaban, maybe his only good task was his warning to Harry. I think it was the easiest way to close the chapter about him. Since Harry didn't know him he won't miss him.

You did one mistake in the epiloge ... Dolores was already dead since the dementor attack. You only need to use some other name (inhabitant).

Great story. Only question I have is who did Harry marry?

An incredible story. I greatly appreciate that you could take the highly manipulated and abused Harry trope along with the bashing of typical light characters in a new and refreshing way. Please continue writing.

Delores was kissed so how could the twins kill her?

I could see this from Ron, but the Granger bashing makes zero sense. Not my cuppa.