Thanks for a great story.

Fucking hell, that was tedious...
The author fell into the same shithole as other wannabe writers: using 100 words to describe something that could be described with 5. Seriously, 9 chapters that could be trimmed in 2-3, with no loss storywise whatsoever.
I don't know how people can stand this kind of writhing.
My advice, remake everything, transform 9 chapters into 2-3, make less boring observation/descriptions and more actual plot and dialogue, and finish this shit already.
For what is worth, it 3/10
Cheers

I hate this Harry. It’s really unreasonable after he found out they didn’t him. He seems to be on the path of a dark lord with the way he treats people

Really hope you finish this. Your version of Harry is really good as most fics have a wimp for the mc.

hope you come back . this is one of the best harry potter fanfic there is for me. sure some of the things are a little bit cilche but the way you write and how you portrayed harry from being a abandoned child with baggage to a adult though he is 18 with a daughter and a few loved ones.

Really Really loved your story, and I'm begging you to atleast finish the voldy arc, pleasssse.

I knew you were going to reference the Nymphadora whining and it's still annoying. What she said applies to literally everyone on the planet, and it didn't even make sense in context. Good story though.

just finished this story again and i really hope you will come back to it soon. its a great story and i like harry as a merc. he starts out as a boy who loses hope maybe even his soul but is slowly finding those things again. finally starting to heal. looking forward to more chapters.

Excellent story. Lots of new ideas. I really enjoyed it.

wish this sas finished

Really good. Hope it gets finished

dude the story is amazing, it's so good, it's actually realistic for how people who are raised in a normal world would react to killing no edgy ooh he's strong and on the right side so killing fine, nah, it's closer to reality in terms of character development, the fluffy moments create a wonderful balance, keep it up my man, it's an amazing work and I'd be so happy to see it continue

Magnificent story!

Thanks

This was a promising story but I found myself skimming the last few chapters especially with Nymphadora's reaction to Harry killing the Death eaters - I can understand Dumbledore not wanting to kill after his sister but I find it hard to comprehend how she could be so naive and think that she was right after seeing and knowing what the Death eaters are capable of doing. This reaction has ruined the story for me as it's simply not realistic at all and it becomes frustrating to read.

needs more updates.