|Reviews for Charon|
| yobtvomot1 chapter 27 . 8/4
Thanks for a great story.
| romieX chapter 9 . 8/4
Fucking hell, that was tedious...
The author fell into the same shithole as other wannabe writers: using 100 words to describe something that could be described with 5. Seriously, 9 chapters that could be trimmed in 2-3, with no loss storywise whatsoever.
I don't know how people can stand this kind of writhing.
My advice, remake everything, transform 9 chapters into 2-3, make less boring observation/descriptions and more actual plot and dialogue, and finish this shit already.
For what is worth, it 3/10
| Jack0827 chapter 15 . 8/1
I hate this Harry. It’s really unreasonable after he found out they didn’t him. He seems to be on the path of a dark lord with the way he treats people
| Arcturus Black1234 chapter 27 . 8/1
Really hope you finish this. Your version of Harry is really good as most fics have a wimp for the mc.
| Golden Wind God chapter 27 . 7/23
hope you come back . this is one of the best harry potter fanfic there is for me. sure some of the things are a little bit cilche but the way you write and how you portrayed harry from being a abandoned child with baggage to a adult though he is 18 with a daughter and a few loved ones.
| Solstice07 chapter 11 . 7/12
Really Really loved your story, and I'm begging you to atleast finish the voldy arc, pleasssse.
| wtfchrlz chapter 24 . 7/6
I knew you were going to reference the Nymphadora whining and it's still annoying. What she said applies to literally everyone on the planet, and it didn't even make sense in context. Good story though.
| josh chapter 27 . 6/29
just finished this story again and i really hope you will come back to it soon. its a great story and i like harry as a merc. he starts out as a boy who loses hope maybe even his soul but is slowly finding those things again. finally starting to heal. looking forward to more chapters.
| rayhawkins10 chapter 27 . 6/6
Excellent story. Lots of new ideas. I really enjoyed it.
| Mark Sinfield chapter 27 . 5/27
wish this sas finished
| Jack0827 chapter 27 . 5/20
Really good. Hope it gets finished
| LoweredUp chapter 1 . 5/8
dude the story is amazing, it's so good, it's actually realistic for how people who are raised in a normal world would react to killing no edgy ooh he's strong and on the right side so killing fine, nah, it's closer to reality in terms of character development, the fluffy moments create a wonderful balance, keep it up my man, it's an amazing work and I'd be so happy to see it continue
| Chris chapter 27 . 5/6
| Guest chapter 27 . 3/20
This was a promising story but I found myself skimming the last few chapters especially with Nymphadora's reaction to Harry killing the Death eaters - I can understand Dumbledore not wanting to kill after his sister but I find it hard to comprehend how she could be so naive and think that she was right after seeing and knowing what the Death eaters are capable of doing. This reaction has ruined the story for me as it's simply not realistic at all and it becomes frustrating to read.
| jimmy.oz chapter 27 . 3/14
needs more updates.