Pathetic

The story is solid but after having read your more recent material I can definitely see that you've improved a lot as a writer.

Bit too much pandering for my tastes. Alohamora and episky are both first year spells, not that absurd. It isnt like he just blew his house up intentionally

Why is every alternate charscter named ares? Nothing against the name, but this is like the fifth name. Besides the fact that im pretty sure harry would have no idea who ares is anyway.

Filch aint that old mate

Great story and plot line! Like how your evolving a dark story line into something more hopeful with him establishing relationships.

I hope he does eventually reconnect with Sirius, NOT James and Lily, I don’t care about their reasons, they majorly fucked up, but Sirius, Nymphadora, and the Tonks’ tried to find him

Kill yopurself

That fool does not understandvthatvDora is not his slave

Good story,just wish you finished it,hell you could have just had Voldemort die in the last chapter in that battle and then a little epilogue if you weren’t gonna finish it

Your last chapter was well worth the wait! I do hope you continue, you write not only well but intelligently- I was completely engrossed in your story and read it straight through. Thank you for sharing it!

Yeah, just can't read it no more. Thanks for ruining it for me. appreciate you wasting my time.

it's been a pretty decent read so far, until you introduce the nightshade shit. Had to give him some overwhelming advantage huh? just one of the oldest most power family's. Couldn't have just made your harry work his way up there huh. Had to get the goblins of his side. First, there's simply no way he thought that he could access his family's money without the head of house knowing. Ducking dumb. Second, he kind of learnt magic to be able to seal people shit to survive didn't he? So thanks for taking out the independent harry aspect. Instead let's give him an all power extinct family name, haven't read further but I bet you he'll get gold, knowledge and a fucking house out of it too. Because that's what he NEEDS and you've got no idea how to give it to him without pulling some bullshit out of your ass. Fucking ridiculous. And I hate how writers think that harry having any kind of talent and showing the goblins respect and they'll just DO shit for him. How do you people manage to fuck up your stories all at once? I'll say this tho, It was actually pretty good before this. and it'll still be pretty good after. Was just hoping you had a drop of writing talent so you didn't have to pull some bullshit from kingdocum.

Please update!

Please update this!