| Reviews for Charon |
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   Guachico chapter 27 . 1/7/2022 Wow. You’ve got an amazing talent for writing conflict. That battle was intense! Thanks for writing. G. |
| Solschenizyn chapter 27 . 1/7/2022 What a nice surprise that you have returned. Even nicer is how you have returned, it's a lovely chapter, a thrilling read. While I would allways choose for you to write more rather than less if it was up to me, it's quite understandable that over time that spark can sometimes be elusive as you outgrow the story you once layed out. That you still intend to finish the story arc is very much appreciated and I hope you can still enjoy any further work on the story. |
| DocCBM chapter 27 . 1/7/2022 Very good |
| DocCBM chapter 26 . 1/7/2022 Very well done |
| DocCBM chapter 25 . 1/7/2022 Interesting indeed |
| Elemental Ninja 1608 chapter 27 . 1/7/2022 I really enjoyed this chapter. it had been quite a while since I read the story so I had to refresh my memory bit this chapter was amazing. It does leave me wanting more, especially since a lot of things are going to need to be addressed. Great work |
| DocCBM chapter 17 . 1/7/2022 Nicely done indeed |
| DocCBM chapter 16 . 1/7/2022 Still interesting |
| DocCBM chapter 15 . 1/7/2022 Interesting |
| DocCBM chapter 14 . 1/7/2022 Nicely done |
| DocCBM chapter 13 . 1/7/2022 Nice |
| Spidersauce chapter 27 . 1/7/2022 Thanks for updatingLooking forward to more. |
| Fgougeon chapter 12 . 1/7/2022 Really you made the peverell family an offshoot of your oc family, kinda dumb |
| Naiden chapter 27 . 1/7/2022 Excellent chapter. Forgot how much I've missed this story. |
| dammyd chapter 1 . 1/7/2022 Hmm. The way he ended up with the Dursely is a little fishy. And it doesn't really match with what you have portrayed before. You didn't portray Lily and James as Dumbledore worshippers. And he didn't use any magic on them. thats the only way it could have worked. Lily is a witch. She could have made herself invisible and went and checked on Harry any time she wanted especially when she had doubt that Petunia had changed. And thats just one of the reasons it felt fishy I think with the Scenario you set up initially, the smoothest way would have been to have Peter or another death eater attack the potters and capture Harry and in the process of apparting out, Harry's magic lashed out and he landed in the muggle world in like Russia or something. And the last thing he saw was the manor exploding so he believes everyone he loves is dead.. Then you can work in the abuse at a muggle orphanage and meeting someone and that person dying and so on. You can work on the Lord of the nightshade house running into him and blood adopting him before he died or something But as you noticed that would bit included Lily and James bashing... So if you wanted to include alienating Lily and James, then I guess you did go the right route |