please continiue

A really interesting story but honestly in the last few chapters you lay in on to thick with the Drama.

Also not really a fan of the thing with Tonks, just make clean lines or cut her out, like this she only gets on my nerves.

All in all a solid story

This story is just like, so fucking bad. It's honest to god ass.

Please update!

That is one powerful story. After starting to read I had a hard time to stop. I really loved the way you developed Harry's character. And that again and again he finds someone to make him whole again. I will be bookmarking this story and come back to check for an update. This is one of my favorit HP stories.

I really hope you come back and finish this story. I've read this at least a half a dozen times, and yet, I still tear up at certain scenes. Great writing!

please do continue to write this amazing story
you have written an amazing plotline character development
you can bounce of ideas from readers to continue forward

Really want to see this end properly. Hope you haven't abandoned it.

you will continue with the story

:)

Not gonna lie tears started falling from my eyes reading this...

Update?

This story is amazing, so I hope you will come back and let us know what happens next! When I was on ch. 24 (knowing that ch 26 is the last one for awhile) I started to worry that this was going to be one of those incomplete fics where Harry gets captured by the bad guys and then the author quits updating—so I’m really happy that you did come back to get him out of there (AND you had a brief encounter with the Potters, which is a a classic scene in WBWL stories…and I understand and respect the fact that you are trying to avoid cliches in your story, but that’s exactly why i am so curious to see how you play things in your version). I would love to see Harry confronting Voldemort and the Austrian dude (im not even going to try to spell his name from memory here) and possibly further scenes with the Potters (even if it’s not Harry confronting them further, I would like to see Sirius or Tonks talk to them and let them know the truth because I have to admit that I just want to read their reactions…). Anyway, I hope you are well during this scary and strange pandemic era. Even if you don’t return to update, thank you for sharing this much of this compelling story!

During chapter 7, I thought that Harry would find his way back to the magical world, would find Sirius and find out the truth about what happened before getting adopted and becoming Heir Black. Then, once all that was sorted they would walk back into the warehouse, everyone would become un-homeless (don't judge me) and Olivia and Sirius would get married while Harry would be at the top of all his classes at Hogwarts.

update?