Reviews for Charon |
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Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2023 Please update this! |
Fredward1 chapter 27 . 10/4/2023 4 years of writing made you a talented writer. I anticipate the next chapter whenever/if it comes out |
Fredward1 chapter 9 . 10/3/2023 How would portraits from 700 years ago know about the light and the dark? They wouldnt. They wouldnt know anything about politics. Hell they’d probably think that the killing curse was still used for killing animals and maybe just recently became a weapon against other wizards. You need to think about things like this when writing |
Fredward1 chapter 8 . 10/3/2023 Nughtshade? Jesus Christ your angsty cringe is unbearable. You shouldve just done perrevell and called it a day. |
yobtvomot1 chapter 27 . 8/4/2023 Thanks for a great story. |
romieX chapter 9 . 8/4/2023 Fucking hell, that was tedious... The author fell into the same shithole as other wannabe writers: using 100 words to describe something that could be described with 5. Seriously, 9 chapters that could be trimmed in 2-3, with no loss storywise whatsoever. I don't know how people can stand this kind of writhing. My advice, remake everything, transform 9 chapters into 2-3, make less boring observation/descriptions and more actual plot and dialogue, and finish this shit already. For what is worth, it 3/10 Cheers |
Jack0827 chapter 15 . 8/1/2023 I hate this Harry. It’s really unreasonable after he found out they didn’t him. He seems to be on the path of a dark lord with the way he treats people |
Arcturus Black1234 chapter 27 . 8/1/2023 Really hope you finish this. Your version of Harry is really good as most fics have a wimp for the mc. |
Golden Wind God chapter 27 . 7/23/2023 hope you come back . this is one of the best harry potter fanfic there is for me. sure some of the things are a little bit cilche but the way you write and how you portrayed harry from being a abandoned child with baggage to a adult though he is 18 with a daughter and a few loved ones. |
Solstice07 chapter 11 . 7/12/2023 Really Really loved your story, and I'm begging you to atleast finish the voldy arc, pleasssse. |
wtfchrlz chapter 24 . 7/6/2023 I knew you were going to reference the Nymphadora whining and it's still annoying. What she said applies to literally everyone on the planet, and it didn't even make sense in context. Good story though. |
josh chapter 27 . 6/29/2023 just finished this story again and i really hope you will come back to it soon. its a great story and i like harry as a merc. he starts out as a boy who loses hope maybe even his soul but is slowly finding those things again. finally starting to heal. looking forward to more chapters. |
rayhawkins10 chapter 27 . 6/6/2023 Excellent story. Lots of new ideas. I really enjoyed it. |
Mark Sinfield chapter 27 . 5/27/2023 wish this sas finished |
Jack0827 chapter 27 . 5/20/2023 Really good. Hope it gets finished |