Reviews for Charon |
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LoweredUp chapter 1 . 5/8/2023 dude the story is amazing, it's so good, it's actually realistic for how people who are raised in a normal world would react to killing no edgy ooh he's strong and on the right side so killing fine, nah, it's closer to reality in terms of character development, the fluffy moments create a wonderful balance, keep it up my man, it's an amazing work and I'd be so happy to see it continue |
Chris chapter 27 . 5/6/2023 Magnificent story! Thanks |
Guest chapter 27 . 3/20/2023 This was a promising story but I found myself skimming the last few chapters especially with Nymphadora's reaction to Harry killing the Death eaters - I can understand Dumbledore not wanting to kill after his sister but I find it hard to comprehend how she could be so naive and think that she was right after seeing and knowing what the Death eaters are capable of doing. This reaction has ruined the story for me as it's simply not realistic at all and it becomes frustrating to read. |
jimmy.oz chapter 27 . 3/14/2023 needs more updates. |
Simmonschr chapter 27 . 2/19/2023 it's official I'm hooked you better continue this fic or I'm going so so pissed, great chapter can't wait for the next one |
jwbones2000 chapter 27 . 2/13/2023 I really hope you finish this one. Great storyline. |
bossyman15 chapter 27 . 2/11/2023 I've enjoyed this story very much! I have followed this story in hope you will continue this story. Excellent job thus far! |
StayBlessed chapter 26 . 2/9/2023 Re-read this great work of fiction. Hoping you have the chance to update it soon! |
MayaviPanchi chapter 1 . 1/17/2023 I was pretty skeptical about this fic. As I don't like cliches . This fic had cliches but it gives pretty good reasoning, also I liked the fact that there was no mindless bashing of anyone even Dumbledore. The story starts to pickup halfway through and gets better and better. Please, return to the story when you get your muse back. |
Guest chapter 27 . 1/8/2023 It’s been a year and three days since the last update. Hopefully you won’t make us wait much longer for another one:( |
Volunteer Insomniac chapter 27 . 12/18/2022 the stories good, just read it. just bear through some of the more unbelievable things that happen, even though after the story truly starts I don't remember any real wtf moments after the first few chapters. spoilers beyond this point. hope this gets finished, the start was a tad hard to swallow, but after that it quickly became one of my favorite stories on this sight. there are some things that I might've changed, but other than the iffy logic at the start the writing is incredible (at least to my standarts) and all the characters felt like, or close to, real people rather than some npc characters that can be found in many other stories. I feel like to end this story he just needs to somehow defeat mouldywart McChromedome and have some sort of happily ever after that shows the beginning of a happy ending or Harry beginning to heal or learn to live with all of the trauma he's gone through. I really hope nobody Harry cares about dies. please, I need more, it hurts my soul to see an amazingly good story with great execution just sit there, abandoned, as the belive few try and revive the story but just can't get it right. I find that the right music really gets me in the right mood to enjoy reading, maybe it can help focus some additional unutilised genius bouncing around your head. I hope whoever reads this has a nice day, adios, goodbye, farewell, etc... |
Volunteer Insomniac chapter 11 . 12/17/2022 why does he tell his whole life story when he could just say, "I and a member of your family used a ritual so I could pass on my line even though I didn't have any children". that is both easier and more practical, and I doubt he would share such personal info to some random person without them specifically asking for the full story. |
Ltbutterfly287 chapter 8 . 12/9/2022 Honestly this story so far has yet to really set itself apart, I honestly haven’t looked at when you read it but this feels like it was written five years ago when the trope of extremely abused Harry goes dark and loses his ability to express emotion equals cool. Being the heir of a completely original House is over done and quite honestly old. Being the heir to a Hogwarts founder is cringe as fuck and far to common. Simple is always better but most writers fail to understand that. Lastly I can already feel the plot and how it’s going to play out. His parents already feel extreme remorse and think he’s dead, so Harry is either going to hate them with a passion and never forgive them or he’s going to be indifferent and cold and never forgive them because no one ever goes the forgiveness route. |
Ltbutterfly287 chapter 5 . 12/9/2022 The problem with no accidental magic meaning your a squib is that accidental magic requires extreme emotion. That’s why it usually only happens as a child but for the most part of you don’t really want something or aren’t being pushed to a emotional extreme nothing would ever happen. |
Ltbutterfly287 chapter 3 . 12/9/2022 Yep this was incredibly forced, even then sending Harry to petunia is pretty forced cause lily had a falling out with her years ago. Even the Dumbledore had a pretty weak argument seeing how he just said “no accidental magic squib, which means he has to go for his own safety” |