Reviews for In darkness, where fear and shadows lie
Nelis555 chapter 15 . 3/21
I really like this story and I hope that you update it soon, I really want to know what happens to Sirius. Pliss update XD, it’s really good!
withrewings chapter 15 . 2/12/2019
i miss reading this story a lot, and i really hope it's not abandoned!
Son of Whitebeard chapter 14 . 6/30/2018
Son of Whitebeard chapter 13 . 6/16/2018
ooh telephoning fireplace
Guest chapter 13 . 6/16/2018
Good, so proffesor Collins is not a dick after all!
Guest chapter 12 . 6/11/2018
Profesor Collins was damn hard on Sirius...was the teaching staff not informed of his condition?
Guest chapter 12 . 6/10/2018
Now this is kind of a wake up call to Reg...
Son of Whitebeard chapter 12 . 6/9/2018
Collins is quite the taskmaster
withrewings chapter 10 . 5/27/2018
I really like the idea of this, as well as your ‘The Secret Keeper’ story. I do have a tip for you, though, and I hope it helps. Whenever I read the dialogue between two teenage boys, it seems more like looking into an adult’s thoughts. They use rather professional sounding words, and a lot of the words seem to be forced. In certain spots it just looks like what my essays used to look like when I would attempt to get my word count up by adding in unnecessary words. The story just isn’t immersive, especially for a teenager like myself, when the boys just aren’t saying things that a teenager would say in the real world. I loved the bonding at the end with Moony and Prongs, but I just felt you needed to relax their choice of words a bit. Overall, though, I really do like this story. Your idea is clever and I like the way you interpret the characters. I really hope my tip helps you in the future, and I’m really excited to read more of both of your fics!
Guest chapter 10 . 5/19/2018
Thank you for the quick update next to your 'The Secretkeeper' :D
Guest chapter 9 . 5/6/2018
Thank you for this quick update :)
Guest chapter 8 . 5/2/2018
what a homecomming for McGonagall...
jinbeomtuan chapter 6 . 4/18/2018
I’m loving this story. Keep it up!
jinbeomtuan chapter 6 . 4/18/2018
I’m loving this story! Great work!
Lala chapter 5 . 4/16/2018
You don't get enough credit it is awesome !
Please upload more chapter I want to know what is going to happen
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