Reviews for A Serpent in the Grass
Guest chapter 10 . 7/22
Lame that you let Ophidia get pick on. She's suppose to be fearsome but you're not writing her to be at all.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/22
I'm disappointed that I had such high expectation for the girl that houses Tom Riddle in her body.
Guest chapter 8 . 7/22
First of all, making Ophidia scared of Gryffindors is not only embarrassing but also lame. Secondly, she should plan to get rid of the cat, if you know what I mean. I want Ophidia to act more ruthless.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/22
I would advise you to get rid of that Diana girl. She's incredibly annoying.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22
That Diana character seems annoying. You should of just stuck to the book characters, with the excep of Ophidia.
Joshua the Arcanis chapter 13 . 7/21
Interesting chapter. Very morbid ending. I got a large headache as of right now, so I won't leave a full review, but this was a good chapter, nonetheless. Until next time.
-Josh
readingtilldawn chapter 1 . 6/28
I started reading this on Tuesday. It is now Thursday night. I was so enamored with this story of yours that it only took 2 days (despite 12 hour shifts). The mysteries that you have woven into this character is great and the OC was integrated into the Harry Potter franchise almost seamlessly!
Can't wait to see what's coming up next
Joshua the Arcanis chapter 12 . 6/21
Another chapter? Awesome. This 'Grimsson' character is quite interesting. I like him, so far. I wonder what his relation to Greyback is? Anyway, S.O.B. Sirius Orion Black, I'm assuming? Maybe we'll be getting information on Ophidia's heritage? This should be interesting. Awaiting your next chapter.
-Josh
Joshua the Arcanis chapter 9 . 6/7
Ahah! Disregard my comment about F.G. I was thinking too narrow-mindedly.
Joshua the Arcanis chapter 11 . 6/7
Nice update, though I must say, I do wonder who F.G. is. It's not any of the Greengrasses we know, nor Grindelwald or Gregorovich. I'm curious. On a different note, the "baking" session between Ophidia and Diana should be interesting. I'll be awaiting the next update.
-Josh
Joshua the Arcanis chapter 10 . 6/5
Oh, I like this. Quite a bit, in fact. It's an interesting concept, and with so many mysteries littered about, it is hard not to be intrigued. I look forward to your next update.
-Josh
Milou05 chapter 1 . 4/9
this is amazing!

I love this story and i want you to now that you have done a great job. Just one thing, at the letter to Hogwarts, can you write " september the 1" instead of "1 september".

I really look forward to read more.
jiemae chapter 1 . 3/26
wonderful job! I really enjoy how well this was written