I can't believe it! A story where Rin is present, and someone manages to be cuter than her! This is a blasphemy! Favorited

Lmaooo

Once again, shirou gets screwed over by his mirror image.

You know, someone, even you if you wanted, could use Kischur Zelretch Schweinorg's Comment for him to kidnap and temporarily revive Shirou's Friends and Family like Rin, Sakura, Illya, Irisviel, Kiritsugu, Saber, and as a surprise, Taiga Fujimura as well, and make her say "What are you talking about? My Family have always known about the Moonlit World. I mean, seriously, who do you think inform the Enforcers about Zolken Makiri?" Then summons a Polearm with her Clothes becoming more like that of a Yakuza Boss but with Cat Ears on her head. "And why do you think my Tora-Shinai felt like there's a Curse Tiger within it?" she said with her eyes glowing gold with slits as pupils before she return back to normal.

Just in case, this is just a suggestion you could do, but not asking you to do. It is your choice if you wish to do it. And I'm saying this cause I read a couple of fanfiction where the authors complain about it.

XD poor Iris. Thank goodness that was actually clean, but never before now have i read a hp story, where the cloak was used to hide SEX and Coitus! XP my goodness, oh Merlin! It does lead me to curiosity: if indeed Iris Potter was Concieved under that cloak, could she be more attuned to the energies of the Deathly Hollows and abilities than anyone else outside the Peverell line?

kek

From my own Memories alone, there should be 7 Stes of Tracing, not 5. Is it intentional or not?

Huh? Shirou has a scar? Weird…and isn’t he supposed to have projections that can last years? I have vague memories of him having a washing machine that has lasted for years, though I’m not fully sure if I remember that from fanon or not, I’m fairly sure it’s canon.

“Then Shirou made the connection. Draco reminded him of Shinji.”

Hey! Shinji is too far man. Just because Draco is a snob elitist doesn’t mean he’s Shinji level. He’s probably more like what’s average around the clock tower.

“Shirou narrowed his eyes at the display of magic. That had been some form of Reinforcement, one that restored something to its former state. It was something that he was capable of, but it had taken him years of training to achieve. Hermione couldn't have been training for more than a few weeks if the rules for schooling wizards were to be believed. He also couldn't figure out when she had analyzed the glasses to figure out what material would be required to replace the broken piece. Shirou could have figured it out by using his eyes' ability to remotely apply Structural Grasping, but he wanted to believe that his rather unique skill wasn't so easily mimicked in this world that a girl with two weeks of practice could do it.”

I mean, you can sort of call it Alteration, but I’m pretty sure it’s a fairly common Magecraft to be able to repair things. Shirou is just such a specialized magus that he’s trash at everything but his chosen and very small field. I think.

You know, considering how Shirou is a specialized magus to begin with, and how easy the people in this universe seem to do insane things, Shirou is going to have quite a hard time, huh? I doubt he can easily just pull out strong enough Noble Phantasm after Noble Phantasm. I don’t think he’s actually even ready to deploy Unlimited Blade Works, so…hopefully something works out.

Honestly, I expect Dumbledore to be suspicious of Shirou.
Orphan with no known background. From day one associated with Iris. Secretive with abilities until directly confronted after having used them in front of witnesses. And “accidental magic” that’s incredibly under his control.
Like half of those things point to similarities to Tom.

I really love Shirou and the mirror.
It’s not his ideal it’s Kiritsugu’s. And it’s a selfish, contradictory, one with no real end. No final achievement for him to desire. Just saving.

You know, I wonder if you could make another Version of this Story, but instead, Shirou is Harry Potter.

Aka, at Shirou's Death Bed, Zelretch, as his way to Screw with Alaya, have taken Shirou's Soul and Placed it within Harry Potter, Fusing the 2, while Mentally Locking away the Soul Fragment of Voldemort with a Soul Cage of Ereshkigal.

As Shirou, who believed to have been Reincarnated into a New world as Harry Potter, live his new life, he secretly trained his Magecraft, while Secretly learning his New worlds Magic base on the Information he could obtain from the Soul Fragment, along with Planning on how to get rid of his Mundane Family from his Birth Mother's Side, which, when he's taken to Hogwarts, his Plan lead to the Dursleys being Locked Up for good.

I wanted to see Shirou aka Harry doing some Magecraft outside of Tracing like Familiar Creation like how Illya and Irisviel makes their Single Strand of Hair Familiars, or Fusing Multiple Magecraft into 1, like Jewelcraft for the Core, Shikigami for the Soul, Golemancy for the Body and Shadow Servant for the Shape and who's he's Re-creating.

I could even Imagine Harry impressing Snape due to his Knowledge towards Alchemy even, hell, even Reforging yet Altering Caliburn into a Katana, as a Form of tribute towards both Artoria Pendragon and Sengo Muramasa.

I was also hoping for Shirou to have a Rapier as his Wand for the Fun of it.

See, it's Iris' talent with animals that make me think a servant version of her would be a Rider over the obvious Caster. And that she has the nickname of the Witch of all Creatures.

I realize that it's not actually sentient, but every time I read this chapter, I get the mental image of the cloak starting to wake up, and its first thought is, "...why do I feel like I was just beaten half to death?"

Heavens, any human would strongly disgusted with chronological usage of Invincible cloak, poor Iris and Shirou got such information that may imprint for lifetime (ﾉ)ﾉ ﾐ

Please don't have other FATE charactors as antagonists, it's way too overdone.I came here for *Shiro*'s adventures in the wizarding world, not the entire FATE cast's adventures in the wizarding world.

If you are going to do that, please put a spoiler warning in the summary of your fics like (Other Fate Characters Included), and for pete's sake *please* don't add other Servants or suddenly make it a Holy Grail War as a plot twist, because again it's overdone.