Reviews for The Arms of Hydra
Vadercat chapter 1 . 10/24/2018
Cute story. still doesn't explain why the Ancients created them. what was their purpose and why do they react to Ata gene, if Ancients created them, wouldn't you think they'd be friendly to the gene?
Lorraine Anderson chapter 1 . 3/28/2018
Thanks for the reviews. Hopefully the formatting looks better now - that's what I get when I try to add a story from my phone... :-(
Sheppardlover928 chapter 1 . 3/28/2018
not much attention is given to what lies in the city itself, so thanks for the story! Interesting creatures but why did the Ancients create them, I wonder? I was a little confused as you could write more detail when scenes shift, but otherwise a fun story!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/27/2018
Thanks for the story.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/27/2018
Interesting and good except that it was hard to follow because you needed more detail about where and when things happened.
MandaScooby chapter 1 . 3/27/2018
This is a fun story! I enjoyed it. My one suggestion would be to add section breaks, I got confused at one point when it shifted scenes. Keep up the good work!