Reviews for Tainted Desire |
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![]() ![]() Meh. Your other story was better and more believable...it's probably because it's Draco. |
![]() ![]() 10/10 The story in general is excellent as it is seen almost always from Draco's perspective, but I think it needed more reactions from those involved with the girls he is conquering when they notice his changes, and even though we already know Draco's true objectives, more interactions with the original plot are needed even though canonically it is already in the last book, because otherwise the story seems more like Smut with a little plot, instead of a plot with some smut. Maybe Draco could try to become more openly the "hero" he tries to portray himself to Great Britain or the world since it would be enough to take Narcissa and leave Lucius to his fate. Besides, it seems a waste to own the Elder Wand but so far avoid direct conflict or strengthen his magic in some way so as not to risk ownership of the wand. On the other hand, considering that "Draco" does not have a positive morality, it would be interesting to see him more involved with celebrities from the muggle/real world even if they were in a relationship. Although I'm still surprised that until chapter 77 Draco's "official girlfriend" or future wife in the canonical line, Pansy Parkinson and Astoria Greengrass, were not introduced. 1) Narcissa as the first conquest was a delight of what would be considered an incestuous fantasy, although I wish to see her more often, perhaps as an intermediary between Andromeda or Nymphadora, and perhaps even as a close friend of Lady Zabini, also known as "The Black Widow", which will explain dark circumstances by which she was forced to be widowed 7 times or simply because of economic greed. 2) Hermione being conquered was the most fun instead of erotic. Although I found it strange that it was hinted that Hermione is already in a relationship with Ron constantly, when both their first kiss was after destroying some horcruxes, but Hermione's first kiss was most likely Victor, according to Ginny's insinuation. I only hope to see more similarities between her and Lily, as being equally fearless and bookworms, which will make the relationship more fun for Draco. 3) Emma deserved a bigger display of her internal conflicts of going from being a simple housewife to remembering her moments of debauchery at university and destroying any sense of morality by becoming a porn star. 4) Fleur had an exceptional development, from being a woman committed to the condition of the state of the country where her future husband is and devoted to him despite the adversities such as their families or the lack of comfort to which she is accustomed both in her country and in her family economy, but above all highlighting that she is not like any full or half-breed veela by not trying to depend on narcissistic methods. 5) Apoline was portrayed as a complex and simple conquest at the same time, who blindly depended on her "abilities" as a veela to maintain a lifestyle that although enjoyable, made her excessively predictable to someone capable of not being carried away by her physiological impulses, but instead of making her feel humiliated, it causes her her first feeling of true satisfaction by feeling more like a woman than a magical creature capable of having anyone at her feet. 6) Ginevra should be considered much more slutty than even Apoline, since a Veela's lifestyle could be justified physiologically, but the infidelity and hypocrisy of an obsessive love affair she has with "The Boy Who Lived" turns her into a real whore who doesn't even realize she is one, so I would really rather see her humiliated and discarded in front of everyone she knows, after being used in all kinds of ways by Draco until he breaks her mentally. 7) Daphne is never a disappointment as the "Ice Queen" of Slytherin, so at least in front of the public I would prefer her as the "official girlfriend" who would help him maintain the image of maintaining his pureblood customs, perhaps achieving greater emotional closeness through his sister, by somehow freeing her from her future premature death. 8) Susan portrays very well the concept of submissive girls who go unnoticed in unremarkable groups, but who hide a perverted personality and a seductive body that would make them a sexual fantasy for anyone. 9) Lily was a truly shocking revelation, changes like these are what make for hypotheses that, although far-fetched, can be logical enough if certain aspects of the characters' personalities are changed or intensified, such as Dumbledore's morality in his manipulations, Lily and James' forced marriage as soon as they left Hogwarts, despite the fact that she most likely despised him for being a version of the Gryffindor bully leader, the existence of love potions that would be considered illegal drugs in the muggle world for obvious reasons, the unlimited possibilities in the obliviate and imperius spells, the excessive "coincidences" or plot holes, etc, etc, etc. 10) Aurora is a clear example that even this past of hers would be more credible than James changing from being an egocentric bully to a responsible family man at just 20 years old. 11) Cho reflects my exotic desires as many do for Asian girls, so I hope more relevance is added to her origins, perhaps involving the Japanese magical government, etc. 12) Demelza . . . 13) Tracey . . . 14) Muggle redhead in a nightclub . . . Status: Ch.77 (AO3). . . PS: At the moment I have too many fics waiting to be read, but I will definitely read the original works of this author at some point since I really loved this erotic style of writing. stores/Dirk-Grey/author/B09FJV1YW5?isDramIntegratedtrue&shoppingPortalEnabledtrue&refap_rdr&isDramIntegratedtrue&shoppingPortalEnabledtrue dirk_grey/about |
![]() ![]() 10/10 The story in general is excellent as it is seen almost always from Draco's perspective, but I think it needed more reactions from those involved with the girls he is conquering when they notice his changes, and even though we already know Draco's true objectives, more interactions with the original plot are needed even though canonically it is already in the last book, because otherwise the story seems more like Smut with a little plot, instead of a plot with some smut. Maybe Draco could try to become more openly the "hero" he tries to portray himself to Great Britain or the world since it would be enough to take Narcissa and leave Lucius to his fate. Besides, it seems a waste to own the Elder Wand but so far avoid direct conflict or strengthen his magic in some way so as not to risk ownership of the wand. On the other hand, considering that "Draco" does not have a positive morality, it would be interesting to see him more involved with celebrities from the muggle/real world even if they were in a relationship. 1) Narcissa as the first conquest was a delight of what would be considered an incestuous fantasy, although I wish to see her more often, perhaps as an intermediary between Andromeda or Nymphadora, and perhaps even as a close friend of Lady Zabini, also known as "The Black Widow", which will explain dark circumstances by which she was forced to be widowed 7 times or simply because of economic greed. 2) Hermione being conquered was the most fun instead of erotic. Although I found it strange that it was hinted that Hermione is already in a relationship with Ron constantly, when both their first kiss was after destroying some horcruxes, but Hermione's first kiss was most likely Victor, according to Ginny's insinuation. I only hope to see more similarities between her and Lily, as being equally fearless and bookworms, which will make the relationship more fun for Draco. 3) Emma deserved a bigger display of her internal conflicts of going from being a simple housewife to remembering her moments of debauchery at university and destroying any sense of morality by becoming a porn star. 4) Fleur had an exceptional development, from being a woman committed to the condition of the state of the country where her future husband is and devoted to him despite the adversities such as their families or the lack of comfort to which she is accustomed both in her country and in her family economy, but above all highlighting that she is not like any full or half-breed veela by not trying to depend on narcissistic methods. 5) Apoline was portrayed as a complex and simple conquest at the same time, who blindly depended on her "abilities" as a veela to maintain a lifestyle that although enjoyable, made her excessively predictable to someone capable of not being carried away by her physiological impulses, but instead of making her feel humiliated, it causes her her first feeling of true satisfaction by feeling more like a woman than a magical creature capable of having anyone at her feet. 6) Ginevra should be considered much more slutty than even Apoline, since a Veela's lifestyle could be justified physiologically, but the infidelity and hypocrisy of an obsessive love affair she has with "The Boy Who Lived" turns her into a real whore who doesn't even realize she is one, so I would really rather see her humiliated and discarded in front of everyone she knows, after being used in all kinds of ways by Draco until he breaks her mentally. 7) Daphne is never a disappointment as the "Ice Queen" of Slytherin, so at least in front of the public I would prefer her as the "official girlfriend" who would help him maintain the image of maintaining his pureblood customs, perhaps achieving greater emotional closeness through his sister, by somehow freeing her from her future premature death. 8) Susan portrays very well the concept of submissive girls who go unnoticed in unremarkable groups, but who hide a perverted personality and a seductive body that would make them a sexual fantasy for anyone. 9) Lily was a truly shocking revelation, changes like these are what make for hypotheses that, although far-fetched, can be logical enough if certain aspects of the characters' personalities are changed or intensified, such as Dumbledore's morality in his manipulations, Lily and James' forced marriage as soon as they left Hogwarts, despite the fact that she most likely despised him for being a version of the Gryffindor bully leader, the existence of love potions that would be considered illegal drugs in the muggle world for obvious reasons, the unlimited possibilities in the obliviate and imperius spells, the excessive "coincidences" or plot holes, etc, etc, etc. 10) Aurora is a clear example that even this past of hers would be more credible than James changing from being an egocentric bully to a responsible family man at just 20 years old. 11) Cho reflects my exotic desires as many do for Asian girls, so I hope more relevance is added to her origins, perhaps involving the Japanese magical government, etc. 12) Demelza . . . 13) Tracey . . . 14) Muggle redhead in a nightclub . . . Status 2024: Ch. 77, AO3 PS: At the moment I have too many fics waiting to be read, but I will definitely read the original works of this author at some point since I really loved this erotic style of writing stores/Dirk-Grey/author/B09FJV1YW5?isDramIntegratedtrue&shoppingPortalEnabledtrue&refap_rdr&isDramIntegratedtrue&shoppingPortalEnabledtrue dirk_grey/about |
![]() ![]() 10/10 The story in general is excellent as it is seen almost always from Draco's perspective, but I think it needed more reactions from those involved with the girls he is conquering when they notice his changes, and even though we already know Draco's true objectives, more interactions with the original plot are needed even though canonically it is already in the last book, because otherwise the story seems more like Smut with a little plot, instead of a plot with some smut. Maybe Draco could try to become more openly the "hero" he tries to portray himself to Great Britain or the world since it would be enough to take Narcissa and leave Lucius to his fate. Besides, it seems a waste to own the Elder Wand but so far avoid direct conflict or strengthen his magic in some way so as not to risk ownership of the wand. On the other hand, considering that "Draco" does not have a positive morality, it would be interesting to see him more involved with celebrities from the muggle/real world even if they were in a relationship. 1) Narcissa as the first conquest was a delight of what would be considered an incestuous fantasy, although I wish to see her more often, perhaps as an intermediary between Andromeda or Nymphadora, and perhaps even as a close friend of Lady Zabini, also known as "The Black Widow", which will explain dark circumstances by which she was forced to be widowed 7 times or simply because of economic greed. 2) Hermione being conquered was the most fun instead of erotic. Although I found it strange that it was hinted that Hermione is already in a relationship with Ron constantly, when both their first kiss was after destroying some horcruxes, but Hermione's first kiss was most likely Victor, according to Ginny's insinuation. I only hope to see more similarities between her and Lily, as being equally fearless and bookworms, which will make the relationship more fun for Draco. 3) Emma deserved a bigger display of her internal conflicts of going from being a simple housewife to remembering her moments of debauchery at university and destroying any sense of morality by becoming a porn star. 4) Fleur had an exceptional development, from being a woman committed to the condition of the state of the country where her future husband is and devoted to him despite the adversities such as their families or the lack of comfort to which she is accustomed both in her country and in her family economy, but above all highlighting that she is not like any full or half-breed veela by not trying to depend on narcissistic methods. 5) Apoline was portrayed as a complex and simple conquest at the same time, who blindly depended on her "abilities" as a veela to maintain a lifestyle that although enjoyable, made her excessively predictable to someone capable of not being carried away by her physiological impulses, but instead of making her feel humiliated, it causes her her first feeling of true satisfaction by feeling more like a woman than a magical creature capable of having anyone at her feet. 6) Ginevra should be considered much more slutty than even Apoline, since a Veela's lifestyle could be justified physiologically, but the infidelity and hypocrisy of an obsessive love affair she has with "The Boy Who Lived" turns her into a real whore who doesn't even realize she is one, so I would really rather see her humiliated and discarded in front of everyone she knows, after being used in all kinds of ways by Draco until he breaks her mentally. 7) Daphne is never a disappointment as the "Ice Queen" of Slytherin, so at least in front of the public I would prefer her as the "official girlfriend" who would help him maintain the image of maintaining his pureblood customs, perhaps achieving greater emotional closeness through his sister, by somehow freeing her from her future premature death. 8) Susan portrays very well the concept of submissive girls who go unnoticed in unremarkable groups, but who hide a perverted personality and a seductive body that would make them a sexual fantasy for anyone. 9) Lily was a truly shocking revelation, changes like these are what make for hypotheses that, although far-fetched, can be logical enough if certain aspects of the characters' personalities are changed or intensified, such as Dumbledore's morality in his manipulations, Lily and James' forced marriage as soon as they left Hogwarts, despite the fact that she most likely despised him for being a version of the Gryffindor bully leader, the existence of love potions that would be considered illegal drugs in the muggle world for obvious reasons, the unlimited possibilities in the obliviate and imperius spells, the excessive "coincidences" or plot holes, etc, etc, etc. 10) Aurora is a clear example that even this past of hers would be more credible than James changing from being an egocentric bully to a responsible family man at just 20 years old. 11) Cho reflects my exotic desires as many do for Asian girls, so I hope more relevance is added to her origins, perhaps involving the Japanese magical government, etc. 12) Demelza . . . 13) Tracey . . . 14) Muggle redhead in a nightclub . . . Status: "Ch. 77" "AO3" PS: At the moment I have too many fics waiting to be read, but I will definitely read the original works of this author at some point since I really loved this erotic style of writing. stores/Dirk-Grey/author/B09FJV1YW5?isDramIntegratedtrue&shoppingPortalEnabledtrue&refap_rdr&isDramIntegratedtrue&shoppingPortalEnabledtrue dirk_grey/about |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey author, there is a shamless copy of your work on Webnovel under the title “HP: In The Magical World As Draco Malfoy” by Kitamari |
![]() ![]() ![]() It would be hilarious if the rando turned up pregnant later on with his kid or somehow found him again and had a real threesome with them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nahhh he change his course now, he stopped updating this and goes to system xianxia route so anyone can adopt this now |
![]() ![]() ![]() His name is Dirk Grey and he’s still alive. Stop spreading lies. He just mostly focuses on his patreon |
![]() ![]() Dang that so sad. How did he died? I’ll ask my brother to adopt “Tainted Desire” that’s my favorite story |
![]() ![]() Unfortunately aTasteOfDarkness passed away but he put this fic up for adoption. He was planning on adding a Astoria and Daphne three way with Draco. Please adopt this fic with honor! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well with how shitty this version of Bill is,he never deserved Fleur anyway. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is some real degenerate shit. But thankfully it's not as bad as I was dreading. |
![]() ![]() Is this discontinued? |