Reviews for Tainted Desire
Ronnie R15 chapter 11 . 9/19/2018
Why don't you have your OC meet some of the other ladies of the Potterverse, like the Greengrass sisters, Susan Bones or Ginny?
marsolino chapter 11 . 9/19/2018
The original work was very good
reader0007 chapter 11 . 9/19/2018
want to see hermione's mom.
MasterOfDragonsGod chapter 11 . 9/19/2018
Nice chapter
i'm iam chapter 11 . 9/19/2018
i came here for the draco self insert. please don't take half a chapter for self advertisement again
Kai0ken chapter 11 . 9/19/2018
Only one third of the chapter belongs to this fic, the rest is quite clearly self promotion for another fic on Patreon. Disappointing.
Good Day
Modain chapter 11 . 9/19/2018
Excellent chapter, although the second story at the end could easily be posted as a different story on your account. I wouldn't mind seeing more of that story being posted here.
muhamed3871 chapter 11 . 9/19/2018
Great Harry Potter chapter.
Where will you be continuing this new story?
Guest chapter 11 . 9/19/2018
wonderin why he doesnt bang bellatrix unless shes not around anymore, merlin knows she needs a sex life
alec-potter chapter 11 . 9/19/2018
Fantastic chapter. Was missing Cissa and you got her back.
Any chance of Nym making an entrance?
Keep writing
a guy1013 chapter 11 . 9/19/2018
ok,but please update soon and your original story consume majority of the chapter but it's seems oks
scyfly chapter 11 . 9/19/2018
you really are a gifted writer, though i wouldve prefured more of harry potter then a new story. new story is good aswell but you already had 3 going and harry potter has hardly begun
itsMARWIE chapter 11 . 9/19/2018
A-Ma-Zing.
deathcornfive chapter 11 . 9/19/2018
can draco claim ginny and bellatrix also luna that would be great also great chapter really wish you update faster i love this so much and i can't wait for more
Liveandletliveall chapter 11 . 9/19/2018
Seriously? A freaking advertisment in the chapter with 3/4 of the chapter being some other story? You could have put that in your profile. But nooo you just had to put it here
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