lol great ship and character development owo

lol awesome chapter great job dude owo

He probably still has the foundry but a rebuilt star forge would be a much better investment alongside the foundry.

The battle was over he was doing information control

So he didn’t want to bring reinforcements because the public will know about the war but he just decides to tell them after it. How fucken stupid atleast make it logical if your gonna make an excuse

Malevolence was only 4km long so please do your research

What happened to the foundry why dosent he use it more

Um, what? That's so stupid, I thought he was going to steal the dreadnought.

The writing is pretty weird. English isn't your native language is it? There are sentences that read like a machine translation. Maybe try grammarly.

Awesome story! I havent even seen Star Wars and I enjoyed the most part of it. (Although, others I didnt understand, at all.) ;3

What’s the sequel name

You need mental help

Great story so far but I don't see why he is so afraid of becoming Dan, with how you talked about that episode I take it you know how he is created. Now my real question is, If Plasmius is dead and gone why is Danny afraid of becoming Dan? I just don't get it since Dan is half Vlad and half Danny, the ghost half of both that is

Huh, well I’m guessing that Danny’s parents did something irreparably stupid and it got his friends and sister killed. This could be interesting. You have my attention.

Yea!