spelling errors. But a great story never the less.

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I’m not gonna lie, the way that you Structure a lot of your sentences is really rough, like there’s a lot of bad grammar and confusing wording. It’s enough to make me dislike the writing as a whole, the only reason I’m still reading is because the story and the premise of the story are so fascinating and I love what you’re doing with it by making Danny so badass, but still showing that he’s a person in there. And he can use the force?! What?! He was already so OP before, but when an OP character is done right, they can be so incredibly interesting and I think that that’s where you’re heading right now. I hope this doesn’t come off as mean, I’m honestly just trying to give you some constructive criticism to help you improve your writing without being a total dick about it. I really hope that this review does just that.

This is the best fic I've read in a long time! Keep up the awesome work you talented, creative, writer, you!

I think Ashoka should be the paring choice
And "Fendin" is that an play on Danny's human name?

The premise of your story is interesting. Danny's still a little too op for my taste but I understand how powerful of a being he is. That's generally the problem I have with this story. There's no stakes for his character personally because he is too strong. If you say, made him more caring, and had him struggle to protect something or someone then I think his character would be more interesting. On another note why does he need to eat food? isn't he completely dead? You do however have a good grasp on writing, grammar and setting the scene. i hope my review wasn't too harsh. I was only critiquing. Please keep writing

Can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work.

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Wow didn’t expect that. You have me hooked! I can’t wait till you update again!

This could turn very interesting very quickly

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Quite an enjoyable story. I will be looking forward to possible future chapters.

The belief of this galaxy is that the dead become a part of the force, with Danny being full ghost, he will be a walking beacon to every force-sensitive in existence, light and dark. Danny is going to have to be constantly jumping from planet to planet if he doesn’t want to be caught,not like he’ll know he’s being chased, Bolag or Ashla will probably be the ones to tell him or he may find out about the connection between the dead and the force through his books) have Danny have conflicting moralities due to the dark side of the force. Anakin Skywalker had also tried to use both the light side and the dark side but look where he is now, his morals had eroded and is now a Sith Lord

If I recall correctly, isn’t the intro for the Star Wars franchise is “long long ago in a galaxy far far away?” Doesn’t that mean Danny shouldn’t be able to find his planet on the map of the galaxy Clockwork showed him since his planet in a different galaxy, and that Star Wars happened in the distant past which means he’ll need Clockworks assistance in getting there as well a time medallion to stay there?

I believe this story is very interesting keep up the awesome work and I do hope you stick with this story.