Reviews for The Green in the Grey
leadwolf72 chapter 1 . 8/24
if you think dumdassdoor it not evil the way you wrote him your fucking evil your self dumd fuck...
think about it harry could have went with his god father, you must have never been abused as a kid if you had you would no that im right and your a fucking ass .
BarbedCaress chapter 23 . 8/25
Great story!
BarbedCaress chapter 15 . 8/24
Shocked you killed Charlie
But I see how it moves the stofy along
WhiteElfElder chapter 23 . 8/24
What comes of having he stone, wand, and cloak?
WhiteElfElder chapter 21 . 8/24
What about Godric's Shield that was at the Potter home the night of Voldemort's fall? I can think of several ways, mostly created by non-magicals, that Harry could sneak in an from a distance level the Malfoy home with just about everyone inside.
WhiteElfElder chapter 17 . 8/23
the puckered and raised scar may be able to get removed. If Harry's healing will leave no scar, use a knife to removed the raised area so it heals over correctly.
WhiteElfElder chapter 16 . 8/23
I hope that part of what Leo is to do involves killing off the DEs in the prison. I also hope that someone they do not strip Leo of the fortunes and return them to Malfoy.
WhiteElfElder chapter 15 . 8/23
I hope the spell that Harry destroyed the derelict manor with did more than that...hopefully Nagini was in it and died as well. What of the dead bodies, did the DEs take them or leave them?
WhiteElfElder chapter 14 . 8/23
I hope Fudge and Umbridge got kissed, if not then they both go up on charges for all the deaths their insisting on Dementors causes.
WhiteElfElder chapter 11 . 8/21
Leo screwed up by not obliterating Lucius when he had the chance, not to mention using "muggle" means instead of magic to defeat him. I wonder what the Blacks can force out of Fudge for interfering in House business?
WhiteElfElder chapter 10 . 8/21
I hope that Lucius' wand is examined so that he name is utterly destroyed in the public view. Two unforgivables is going to kill the name Malfoy.
Carelise682 chapter 11 . 8/21
love this story
WhiteElfElder chapter 3 . 8/20
For your starting AN of the last chapter...even evil people are doing what they think is right in their view, though they discount the pain and suffering their actions leave on others.

Draco ran his mouth and go off lightly, and I hope that papa Malfoy shows up to try something so he can be handed his arse.
WhiteElfElder chapter 2 . 8/20
What a happy mistake. I do hope when more of the foul things are found that the location for the altar is remembered to make life easier.
WhiteElfElder chapter 1 . 8/20
did the Shield of Gryfindor just vanish, get destroyed, or is everyone just overlooking it?

Putting the bind on Harry is the opposite of what they should have done. If Harry's magic was consuming what was introduced then it was winning and the horcrux was being killed of or assimilated.

Albus has a tracker built into the pendants that I bet none of his followers know he has in them. This is definitely shifting Albus towards the grey it not starting to tint dark. The crap that he did to Sirius could very well cost Sirius his life if magic takes it as Sirius breaking his vows to Harry. These are not the actions of a scion of the light, but someone willing to submerge into darkness to reach their goals at any cost...almost to the point of being evil. The final nail in the illusion of Albus being of the light is the way he handled Harry and the Dursleys. Wouldn't that also be considered "muggle baiting" by the letter of the law?
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