Reviews for Perks of Being the Hokage |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Would have loved to see tsunade’s reaction once she came back to her senses lmao. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not gonna lie. This making me want to read Naruto x Tsunade fanfiction lmao. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hopefully u come back and continue this great work |
![]() ![]() ![]() update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just to let you know ff PURGEING nsfw Stories from the website |
![]() ![]() Hope you continue for a while or add a few more chapters to this and end it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() would still love to see an update in this story. Temari, Tenten and Sakura deserve 2nd apperances |
![]() ![]() Damn that's hot not gonna lie. |
![]() ![]() "He was the strongest ninja in the village, with the possible exception of Sasuke"... huh? what exception? Naruto IS the strongest ninja in the village. PERIOD. |
![]() ![]() ![]() some of the wording could be a bit better but it's funny so far |
![]() ![]() While the grammar is still a bit fucked, it was good. While some if not most... Or all my previous reviews may have seemed insulting or that I hate the story I meant it in good faith, I'm a tough-love kind of person, and I honestly love the story and the idea even if things could be better or certain plot points seemed like an outta place turn. |
![]() ![]() How do you keep fucking up clothing? Why does a dress have buttons? Why do you keep adding buttons? Are you really that stupid? Seriously, I like the story but you keep fucking up. Please... Proofread your stuff. Actually, ever hear of Grammarly, it's free and will help your writing, please use it. |
![]() ![]() You messed up again, albeit small this time, with the clothes. While the grammar and structuring could still use work, this chapter was pretty dang good. |
![]() ![]() My only complaint, besides the grammar, is you saying "ups" instead of "oops". Who the fuck "ups". |
![]() ![]() Once again you fucked up with the clothes. |