Reviews for Foundations
CrackinAndProudOfIt chapter 3 . 4/5
Oh my gosh, I love this so far! Your characterizations are all so brilliant, I seriously can’t get over it. I can hear every line in my head in the characters’ voices. You’ve captured all their patterns and styles of speaking so well, wow :)

I also adore the way you write the Force from Luke’s perspective: the images and metaphors associated with it, the sensations of light and darkness he gets from his own emotions and those of others, the constant mantras from Yoda running through his mind. It’s so complex and layered - such a great side of Luke to see.

And as always, your language and imagery are so gorgeous overall. The description of the Senate hall was lovely, and I also just love the language you use to frame your dialogue. Like describing Leia’s voice as “ivied” with emotion - that’s so vivid and creative, and it’s just one example :)

Anyway, I’m so excited about this story, and I can’t wait for Chapter 4 and for Luke and Lando’s adventures to officially get started :D