|Reviews for If Black Doom tried to be a better father|
| The Bohemian Rhapsody chapter 1 . 7/7
Black Doom, an alien overlord that looooves to fuck.
| Cashlin Snow chapter 1 . 5/14
Swell fic! I laughed so much, that I had to go back and read it to my husband. Cracked up so much at times, I had to stop for air. Oh, and it was written decently well, which really added. Muchos kudos.
| owo chapter 1 . 5/8
shadow: oh thank chaos it was just a dream
shadow: ? ! ? ! ?
| skybluepainter chapter 1 . 8/2/2019
Lmao that ending!
| sonicundertalefan chapter 1 . 2/20/2019
If Black Doom tried to be a better father all hell would break loose and WHERE THE FUCK WAS SONIC IN THIS STORY HE SOULD HAVE BEEN HELPING or was he elsewhere i didn't think shadow would have 22,000 siblings. how the hell does black doom have that many kids...love your writing
| Dragonfire719 chapter 1 . 10/5/2018
This is the best thing I have ever read
| Sunny chapter 1 . 5/10/2018
I tell you one word: AWESOME!
| SOCH14 chapter 1 . 5/10/2018
This was awesome! I love Eclipse! I wish he still existed but sadly since the comics cancelled that ain't happening anymore. Eh who knows? He might eventually come back...
XD once again you've somehow managed to make this extremely enjoyable and hilarious!
Nicely well job as usual!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/21/2018
Two word. Well done!
| Nzul chapter 1 . 4/18/2018
Dude you are too funny! XD
| Shadow-of-death060 chapter 1 . 4/15/2018
I really enjoyed reading your story and I have to say imagining Black Doom casually drinking tea with Shadow was quite amusing. Hope to read more like this from you one day
| CrimsonDarkTheHedgehog chapter 1 . 4/13/2018
LOL!I loved this!
| Aurlim Lapalim chapter 1 . 4/8/2018
Ahahahahaha! This was hilarious! XD
Even though I'm late, this sure was a perfect fic to go with the date!
... "Bob", heheheh
It was just so awkward for the poor Shadow X'D
| Bob chapter 1 . 4/1/2018
Why not Bob?
Bad Outlandish Bad
| darklingforrest chapter 1 . 4/2/2018
This was great! I was holding it together until I read this:
Shadow, come here. We shall perform this ritual earthlings refer to as a 'hug' to reinforce our bond
I lost it LOL