Reviews for Bramare
midnitereader chapter 1 . 4/6
Ooh, I like this Bella, cunning and swift. She makes Edward work for it. It's a shame he feels the need to feed his addiction by fucking whores when he could just be patient. It's one reason Bella resists him.
kinnik chapter 1 . 4/5
Loved it. Really loved it. Great job.
AnakinSmom chapter 1 . 4/5
Man whore vs assassin. Interesting little game of cat and mouse.
jen5795 chapter 1 . 4/5
Love this, please continue it!
RowanBronze chapter 1 . 4/5
Wow! So good! You totally deserve to win this contest! Please continue this story after you win!
MiccaF chapter 1 . 4/4
Excellent!
dazzleglo chapter 1 . 4/4
Loved it.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1
I'm surprised this is in a contest, as there are so many grammar mistakes.

Personally, I really despise the playboy Edward who sleeps around with everybody, while virginal Bella ultimately (and pathetically) waits for him. But to each, their own!
YourVixen chapter 1 . 4/3
I liked this a lot, I liked the build up it was like a careful executed symphony great job
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1
You should continue this it's real good.
Caroleg chapter 1 . 4/3
Can’t believe she stabbed him! She will certainly keep him on his toes. Love a mob ward story where Bella can handle herself. Really hope you continue after the contest
ellekat08 chapter 1 . 4/2
She’s giving in so quickly? No no no make him work more.
EdwardsFirstKiss chapter 1 . 4/2
Hot! Glad Bella knifed Edeard for being a manwhore.
Panda1013 chapter 1 . 4/2
I hope to heaven this is continued! I can’t wait!
FranRichards chapter 1 . 4/2
There has to be more to thius awesome story. Will it be continued?
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