wow this was a good short story I thought. Glad that Charlie was Bella's step father, very interesting I thought. I'm glad that things worked out for the best right.

Well done!

Intriguing...definitely forbidden. I've read Charlie/Bella stories before...there's something about them.

This was certainly a different story... I don't believe I've read or seen a Charlie and Bella romantic tale... Quite risky and brave!

Thank you for entering. Good luck in the contest.

I really liked this one.

Good luck in the contest.

Nice story, even if I'm not a huge fan of Bella/Charlie as a couple. But it's me.
Thank you for sharing.

Love finds a way. Edward was immature and spoiled so it wasn't meant to be. I hope Rose didn't trick him and that they are happy. Charlie and Bella didn't do anything wrong. They waited. I think Reneé was pleased.
Judy

Bravo to the author! Came out the gate strong with a strong first submission. I loved how you pulled this story off. The plot line was well thought out and it seemed you knew exactly how to pair then to make that kind of situation believable. I would suggest having someone beta. There was a lot of reoccurring phases that made reading it seem a bit choppy. God luck to you when voting rolls around :)

Wow. That could have easily come off a little on the skeevy side with the pairing, but you pulled it off. Well done.

Not a fan of the pairing but that would definitely be a secret to keep.

:) loved this

Usually pairing, almost to uncomfortable to read. Thank you to the author!

Loved it :)