a point you missed on the Isshin/Masaki age difference thing is there was ALREADY a large age difference as he was probably at least 100 years old when he met her since he's from Soul Society and I believe born there

That was the worst possible way you could go about it. I absolutely hate wasting my fucking time reading something for 1 hour for the writer to do something like this. Tell me, did you really thing you did something cool here?

I truly wish you continue the story. I am beyond excited to see where you go with it. I am doubtful. You will continue it though because it has been three years since you last updated. I do not judge you because it’s not my place. You likely have your reasons for not continuing and I respect you, but but know that I hope you continue the story and should you do it? I will be extremely happy.

I absolutely love this story. I found another version previously before i found this one. that one was I think seven or 10 chapters long. And buy another version I mean, almost an exact copy with a few differences. I was so upset when it ended because it had so much potential and then a month or two later I find this story. I was was really happy so I bookmark and save it for later and then forget about it and then about three days ago I remember about this story and I’m like OK I wonder what goes on afterwards and was blown away by the quality and storyline you have come up with. while I will admit there are a few grammar mistakes, but those are always excusable. This is by far one of the greatest stories I’ve read on FanFiction

Wish i could delete that previous review only cause its just so mean spirited. This story does have some great moments its just not for me

Man i wanna keep reading this but holy fuck do i think nearly ever girl being so in love with him and him constantly not noticing every other girl outside of his harem. Holy fuck inoue just atill not being in it is so annoying. The harem aspect as a whole is so fucking annoying. Easily the worst part of this whole fic i would love to keep reading it but the all consuming worthless harem aspect is just so uninteresting.

really wish you had continued this. but after 3 years of zero activity? (last update was in March of 2022, it is now april of 2025.) i am going to assume this fic is dead. though hopefully you are not.

you mentioned getting covid, and i know full well the damage that can do. my cousin was hit and has permanent lung damage as a result. others have died.

still, i am hopeful i will hear from you sometime in the future. maybe you will even update this fic. who knows.

and as always

thank you for your time.

Hay just wanted to say that I've loved the story and hope you will continue writing it because it would be a shame for it to end unfinished.
Ps. With how the world is at the moment I hope you and yours are doing ok x

Update please

Now thinking about so nel is stronger than ichigo? You stated that vasco beat kokabiel at his best yet vasco was utterly wrecked by nel

How is he strong enough to fight two super devils and ichigo what is this power scaling? You implied ichigo could fight serafall, serafall would wreck kokabiel

It feels really weird that everyone so far had to go through grueling things to awaken as a super devil yet sona literally just watches ichigo fight and remembers shes pushing for change and boom. That is honestly so dumb atleast rias had something that to her was fighting for her life

I find it really weird that all the girls just randomly start having sex with each other i cannot ever picture orihime doing this at all

The one character in DxD that I always hope dies in a ditch offscreen and you actually try and make excuses for his rapist behavior? Riser is filth, and I hope his soul is eaten and tormented inside White till the end of time. If his behavior is indistinguishable from trash, then he is trash, what is on the inside can never be known and is thus entirely irrelevant; justifications abound from the lips of all monsters, but they don't ever excuse anything.

Considering the last time he posted, I won't be surprised if covid got him. It's been 3 years, I will be happily shocked if he's alive and even remembers the plot of this story.