Reviews for On A Stormy Summer Night
harleenquin82 chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
This made me cry. I think everyone wanted/ wants this. Thanks to stories like yours, we will always have it. Thank you 3
serendipityrain711 chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
Wow that story gave me goosebumps. It was so beautiful and romantic with the rain and arnold calling her a i absolutely loved it! :) AXH forever!
BronteBook chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
God, you write so well, you make me cry! Now I'm realizing that I WANT a boy like Arnold and we can spend the rest of our lives together! UGHHHHH the whole looking out into the future thing was a hooker for me! Dx

This is one of my favorites! I hope my first time will be like this lmao!

GREAT job!

-BronteBook
juliet hartwick chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
This made me cry well done!
youknowismexx chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
Awwh this story is so sweet. I love it :D
Ryan c chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
This was the sweetest thing I have ever read I holo you make one after this so he can tell them he did it with her and again Thay can feel bad about teasing him but I love it100/100 great job man keeIt up
voxclementia92 chapter 1 . 2/18/2012
Beautiful, sweet, sentimental, and gentle. Arnold and Helga were always my favorite couple, which made the ending so much sweeter. Instead of focusing just on the physical side of it, you were sure to highlight the fact that these two are in love-have been, in fact, for a very long time. When they make love, it wouldn't be about the physical side, it would be the fullest expression of affection between soulmates. You captured that perfectly.

Anything else I'd have to say would just be me gushing about how much I love Arnold and Helga, which isn't terribly constructive. Suffice to say, I loved this story. Anything more like this would be fantastic, if you're so inclined to write more. :D
HELGAARNOLD Forever chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
omg i loved this! it was so sweet! one of the best i've read :)

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HAFanForever chapter 1 . 8/14/2010
This is just about the most beautiful, romantic love story between teen Arnold and Helga that I've ever read.

I love how Arnold calls Helga an angel the first time he sees her unclothed (and I'm sure she would have melted at his saying that) and that he wants her to keep the bow on because it was the very first thing he ever noticed about her, and she has no objection to it, so they leave both of their sentimental valued items on when they make love for the first time.

I also like how you didn't need to describe the details of their lovemaking, talking about all the thoughts and memories going through Arnold's mind at that moment is perfect.

And the ending is just brilliant: some time after they finish making love, Arnold is still awake with Helga asleep in his embrace, then he kisses her forehead and rubs her back gently with all of the love he has for her. Their love is beautiful, no other words can express it.

Beautifully done, I love it!
Leili chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
Ohhh, this couple, always doing stuff way too young...

First it's Helga practically making out with Arnold on the rooftop of the FTI building when they're NINE, and now they're doing it at the age of FIFTEEN! Gahhh there goes my happy childhood xD
soundwave chapter 1 . 6/21/2010
wow greate work on your fic
Dark Shuichi chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
Beautiful! A lovely fanfic, written sweetly and eloquently. Very nice job! I look forward to your other works! :)
Jacal Ste. Worme chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
Aww!~! _ Sweet!
Loving-Chakra chapter 1 . 8/28/2007
hey,good story!_
weartheseshorts chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
I think I'm grinning a little too much. If my mom happened to wake up and find out what I was reading, she'd think my grinning is quite... creepy. xD Of course, that's just 'cause it was so good! Loved it, as I come to realize with all your fics so far.

thats me

ahhelga

aka Pauline
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