Reviews for One Last Time
poetif chapter 1 . 8/31
This is...sad, and raw, and painful and powerful and a far far cry from being complete.
LoveDexter11 chapter 4 . 7/24
Wow such a powerful story. I do hope there in an update soon. You really do portray Elliot and Olivia very well.
ncisandsvuaddict chapter 4 . 7/7
I love this fic, please continue it
Heart Story chapter 4 . 6/25
Thank you for updating this story. It’s a very good plot. I want to see how Olivia handles Kathleen and Elliot too!
Cinderella1268 chapter 4 . 6/25
Damn!Fantastic writing once again,very intense, emotional, so old ticker is still in that vice grip!Excellent dialog and characterization. I am looking forward to reading the next amazing update. Thank you loved it. EOEOEOEOEOEOEO.. FOREVERRRRRRRR.. AMEN!
lizzard9 chapter 4 . 6/25
ugh, my heart. bothe of them are in such strange faces and so stubborn. just talk it out already!
Guest chapter 4 . 6/25
Wow I’m so invested in this, you’re a fantastic writing and you’ve got the characters down so well! Please update soon!
Anne Bensler chapter 4 . 6/25
Short but very powerful. Can he really not know? Or does he simply not see her as a victim?
nicolejames4 chapter 1 . 6/25
Love all your stories but could you please finish some that I’ve been waiting and waiting on like Dust and Bone and Sin. All of unfinished ones actually, I’m a big fan and read all your stuff but it’s difficult being left on the ledge!
eorocks chapter 4 . 6/24
This story is just heartbreaking and I have a feeling you’re going to drag us through an emotional wringer. But I’m here for it. Your writing is always so on point. I can feel every emotion and see each scene you’ve painted. Thank you!
lauren chapter 4 . 6/24
really liking this story. different than your other work in many ways, but still beautiful and still captures their personality. his comments on the promotion, then baby. UGH
Guest chapter 4 . 6/24
Can't wait for more
Guest chapter 4 . 6/24
Great story, really interested to see where youre taking this!
Guest chapter 4 . 6/23
Please don’t go breakin my heart
Guest chapter 4 . 6/23
Sad...
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