Reviews for In Plain Sight
Minerva394 chapter 12 . 1/20
What a wonderful story, thank you!
MissMrdel chapter 11 . 12/23/2021
wonderful story. a resorting story from first year on, HG being in slytherin is much more appropriate than being a lion. the snakes will raise HG up and nurture her skills.
Teaching is a ambitious position that few have the understanding of. LV recruiting and molding students from early on would have made a more seamless overtaking of magical England.
wish you all the muses and inspiration.
excessivelyperky chapter 12 . 11/27/2021
Excellent chapter! Hermione is being lured with kindness and gifts, while Severus is being lured with power and the safety of the children, even Harry.

Tom is not anywhere near stupid enough to mess with either.

I wonder if Quirrell/Tom is going to hunt down the Horcruxes or leave them be?

Please, do continue this.
krisshae123 chapter 12 . 7/14/2021
Intro To Fate chapter 12 . 7/11/2021
I must admit, this story is one of the few I will ever review and mostly because it is very unique and I am looking forward to the continuation. The characters are well carried and the plot so different from most that I am thoroughly entranced. I hope to read more soon as it is absolutely well worth the read.
excessivelyperky chapter 11 . 6/25/2021
Yup, Tom is working at the old stand, corrupting students and influencing teachers.

And I can also see Snape schmoozing with Tom and figuring out just who's behind that turban.
excessivelyperky chapter 10 . 4/3/2021
Ah, but Albus benefits from his teachers being too overworked to complain about or change anything. He especially benefits from not allowing any of his teachers to become rivals in creation (note that he won't teach anyone in Alchemy, why is that, I wonder?).

But Hermione is going to have to suck it up about flying eventually.

However, that little lesson about wandless magic was definitely alluring to Harry and Hermione, as it was meant to me.

Yeah, I think Snape has figured out that something is up with Quirrell...
excessivelyperky chapter 9 . 3/20/2021
Good chapter. And it is nice that Harry wants to learn more about the Wizarding World.

And yes, the broom was blatant favoritism, as is Harry's place on the team. I'm surprised that anyone but Snape objected to it, actually.

I see how Snape is helping Hermione with her status in Slytherin (that was sweet of Mr. Nott, it really was). It's sad how her parents seem to not worry about their only daughter.

But Snape's memory of past interactions is very good, as it should be in a world where Polyjuice means people can masquerade as others fairly easily.
Alice Scarlett Knabel chapter 4 . 2/24/2021
so good so far please continue
excessivelyperky chapter 8 . 2/14/2021
It was the right thing to go to that Quidditch game, and Harry really was playing against the rules (Hermione is a rulebook reader, I'm sure Percy Weasley would understand). But of course Slytherin will lose on appeal, because Slytherin always *must* lose, yada yada.

And...books are the best way to corrupt Hermione, because she truly believes all books are right. Oops.
excessivelyperky chapter 7 . 2/12/2021
Yes, there's one way to make sure a rival doesn't come close to the person who discovered so many uses of dragon's blood-simply work him to death.

Tom/Quirinus has a idea to help with that (though if I were Snape, I'd have a talk with the house elves about some of the easier bits like ingredient preparation and offer points to various Ravenclaws for help grading).

And so the slow corruption begins...the sad part is that Tom/Quirinus would be able to make much less headway if the school was run properly to begin with.

I also suggest that the Slytherin girls who have been so very helpful will soon reap the rewards the next time they need assistance with homework.
excessivelyperky chapter 6 . 2/11/2021
Ron and Draco should be friends, they sure think alike. Pansy needs a little adjustment in her attitude as well.

Still, Harry is going to try to stay friends, which is nice, while Tracey and the other intelligent Slytherins will try to make things first.

And if I recall canon, Hermione can be quite ruthless.

I don't blame McGonagall for being upset, but it's not like she's going to change the Gryffindor uber alles attitude any time soon.
excessivelyperky chapter 5 . 2/10/2021
How interesting that it bothers Albus that the Stone may *not* be in peril. But then, to work so hard to construct a Voldie-trap only to find that Voldie is not coming, yeah, that would be disappointing.

And I find a Tom Riddle who didn't lose all his IQ with each Horcrux a lot more fun to read about.

It's nice that Snape is willing to put forward more effort to protect the students than the other teachers seem to be
imnotahorcrux chapter 12 . 2/2/2021
I thought that this latest update was just this January, but then I remembered it's already 2021...

PLEASE UPDATE ! It's so good !
excessivelyperky chapter 4 . 1/30/2021
Well, Hermione will have an interesting time in Slytherin, but if she turns Pansy into a pug dog a couple of times, things would likely calm down.
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