Reviews for In Plain Sight
Locket1 chapter 12 . 1/12/2020
getting a taste of the good stuff now. quite exciting!
Fast Frank chapter 12 . 1/6/2020
Finally caught up. 'Intelligent Tom' is a much interesting character than the 'Half-mad Voldemort' often seen.
Fast Frank chapter 9 . 1/6/2020
Bah! (Humbug?) "Santa Clause" is a pun. The modern Santa Claus is a conflation of Sinter Klaus (Dutch) and Father Christmas (English) with an admixture of C. 's poetry (American).
Fast Frank chapter 8 . 1/6/2020
I smell a bit of "That's our story and we're sticking to it."
Fast Frank chapter 7 . 1/6/2020
:) Just got an image of a Blood Quill equipped Voldemort assigning lines to errant Death Eaters.
FlowerChild23 chapter 12 . 1/8/2020
oh man. I honestly can't wait to see what Riddle does next.
Lucyole chapter 12 . 1/8/2020
Good chapter I reread the whole thing again to know where I am and what had happened so far now his minions know he is back and Severus is not sure what his real agenda is. More please that would be great *cookies for inspiration and the great work*
NarutoGirlxxx chapter 12 . 1/6/2020
I'm so glad that you've updated this story, I can't wait to see what his new plans are and why he is interested in Hermione
BookwormKW chapter 12 . 1/6/2020
More please! I love this Slytherin Hermione—and I also love how Voldemort and Professor Snape are portrayed;
macsmackeroo chapter 12 . 1/6/2020
Amazing chapter! Been looking forward to an new update, I love how Tom is finally moving forward with his plans, excellent work, and I hope your holidays went well.
badkidoh chapter 12 . 1/6/2020
Yet another great chapter, Re-read the other 11 chapters and their still great too.

Also I wounder if Voldemort will find out that Harry is carrying around part of his soul?

Still hope Voldemort resurrects Lily later as I don't think it's possible that Snape can forgive Voldemort for her death; Maybe have Lily forced to take the mark when resurrected in a deal and if Voldemort knows about Harry having part of his soul he could turn her against Dumbledore by pointing out Dumbledore plans to sacrifice Harry to kill Voldemort. Maybe do it at the end of 4th year to get Harry on his side, possibly with Harry blood still being needed?

Also I guess Abraxas Malfoy could be someone to resurrect given he died around 1968-1996 of Dragon Pox or saved form death before he dies?

Also I guess with Voldemort back all his marked followers would know he is back unless he's not at full power or can keep the mark on his followers arms faded at will to hide his return, like form traitors like the Durmstrang Institute headmaster Igor Karkaroff.
rb88 chapter 12 . 1/5/2020
Very good, nice and different characterizations.
Known Anonymous chapter 12 . 1/5/2020
Just found this story and read it in basically one sitting. Very interesting read and a new take on a classic plot. I look forward to reading more.
MegMarieexo chapter 12 . 1/5/2020
This was just fantastic did a whole re-read and the new chapter I absolutely love this fic !
szabo.alexandra1991 chapter 12 . 1/5/2020
This story amazing I read it before but somehow I forget to push the subscribe button, problem solved so I will be on the ready. I loved this story I like Toms different approach to things and yes Hermione is the perfect Slytherin. Thank you for the update Virtual hugs
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