the way you are writing this makes me feel as though youre blind , the storyline is absolute SHIT the constant abuse is pornographic atp

you should cool it with the miserable depressing story beats or just say its a whump story in the title.

0/10. Weird masochistic ass story

Am I supposed to feel sympathy for a idiot who reap what she sowed.

Team 6? Kakashi?

Isi?

This is literally abuse porn, Like just fucking leave

absolutely adored it, found myself completely immersed in the characters, atmosphere and storyline! (:

Really enjoying this, I hope you come back to it some day.

It was okay at first, then you just have to go on with the angst. Well that may be the reality but I can’t handle it. I keep expectng Mc to just finally break in.

Great story! Update soon!

What rude commentators. If you're not interested in the work, go write your own. Just don't read this if you don't like it. As soon as conscience allows one to behave this way. I love this job. The idea is very attractive, I have thought about it many times.

I enjoyed it while it lasted

completely pointless story with over exaggerated drama that could be solved in a million ways if the oc was an actual adult in mind. piling physicalmental problems one after another isn't character development or storytelling.

Lizard brain indeed. Nobody reincarnated would put up with this shit unless they're literally retarted.