Please update the story I want more oc x Erza

I never saw that much changes between 1st and 3rd perspective in a single chapter, seriously this author has a talent as how inept he is at writing, maybe you should go to school and learn some basic writing rules before posting a story.

I just got done reading all nineteen chapters and they are all fucking phenomenal. Honestly it felt like I was reading the anime all over again it was just that great, it's well paced and dont even get me started an the emotional or fluff moments with erza and lucy. You've done an amazing job and I look forward to chapter 20!

I choose Shawn x Erza for now on

Hi how are you I really love this story it’s great and I love the interaction between characters and the personality of shawn

And I love his magic and that he has samurai Japanese sword and he is training also I love his harem which Lucy and erza but can you at least at ultear milkvoich into the harem because I love ultear post timeskip and they would be great couple also I feel that shawn would save her and she would be grateful for him that he gave ur her mother second chance in life

Hi how are you I really love this story I like oc x erza interaction the most and I love how tactical the oc is and how he is training to become stronger also I love how you give the oc celestial key magic and the oc weapon also I love how you revive ur I would love to see how she would interact with her daughter ultear especially when she found that ultear became dark mage

Although I have one complaining
I didn’t like his type of magic while I like that the fact it allowed him to put more effort in training I didn’t like how he’s defenseless without it

I would like to see the oc learn Solid Script, Jutsu Shiki, Dark Écriture, and Orient Solid Script. where both freed and levy teach him their magic

Since none of the oc that I have seen until now could use magic like levy and freed

I am so excited and happy to read this story and see that you haven't abandoned it. I deeply look forward to reading more chapters and hope that you are doing okay, I can't wait to read what Shawn will do when he meets the celestial king. I am also sitting on the edge of my seat to hear what Shawn is and to see more Alder. Best of wishes to you!

Beat aria with gajeel as a club bro!

I cant believe he made katanas~ i kinda wished he made the blades of chaos but a bit longer tho so ya could have more range on melee

Please update soon?!

Don't stop writing there is a creativity here that you are on the verge of achieving please don't leave us hanging.

crash magic is op

not to completly hate but i hate when the oc is teamed up with lucy cause she holds them back like if shes to tired they wait if shes scared they dont do it natsu only pays for food and possibly clothes so she always gets dragons share of the money

I give up, mc is so useless, mc is stupid with a very stupid author

This is so disgusting..! Mc is so stupid