Reviews for The Kansas City Crew
Newguy chapter 1 . 12/28/2018
I was put off reading this story by the elf character. A character's name is a prime opportunity to give readers some idea of what that character is like, (consider the different expectations you would have of a character called "Quicksilver" compared to, say, "Donkey.") By all means be mysterious: you can easily hint that there's more to the character than others know, but give me, your reader, an image to help me keep this character from being confused with the others.

If the author calls a character "No Name" it simply suggests to me that they couldn't be bothered to think up a name.
Aloholic Shark chapter 1 . 4/10/2018
Simply due to the fact that I've lived in KC before I feel obliged to read this.